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youknowimaidiot
2008-08-31 . chapter 1
BeAUTIFUL! Eury is so awesome. This was Beautiful! I hope you write more. Eury is awesome and Ayla needs some work (that was a comment on the manga) But the way you described Ayla made her stronger and well beautiful. Thats my word of the day XD. Anyways do write more this would be a great start of a story!
swasdiva
2008-07-08 . chapter 1
Wow. Not that you were a bad writer when you did the Gundam Wing fics I so enjoyed, but I have to admit I can see marked improvement over the years. There's a new subtlety in your writing, a new urgency and your words dig a little deeper, right under my skull until I can't get the visuals out of my head and my heart is beating just as fast as Ayla's. This was an amazing one-shot. You definitely did our beloved Ozaki-sama justice.
WolfStar713
2007-10-26 . chapter 1
Awe. I love it. I love the reletionship between Eury and Ayla. And I wish Kaori Ozaki would go a little more into it. But than again the story isn't just about them. Anyways, I love the way you went into it. You put great detail into it, and thats super hard for me to do. So I praise you Gaurdian Kysra!
RaineKitsune
2007-10-19 . chapter 1
I just read volume 8 yesterday, and I absolutely loved the scenes between Eury and Ayla. This story was just what I was looking for-- a description from Ayla's point of view. It was written very well, and I really enjoyed reading it. ^^
Mimori Kiryu
2007-09-25 . chapter 1
oh, i just read volume eight today and i loved that scene! your description is amazing and so cute. yay for ayla/eury. so cute.
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