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Miss Katara x
2009-08-21 . chapter 1
Wow, love the Sokka/big Brother overprotectiveness! And the hair, I've pictured it like The tales of Ba Sing Se Jinko scene. I really like this because on most Zutara they do unrealistic reactions about the relationship. But Sokka being... well concerned :D Was perfect.
Miss Katara x
Iron's Grasp
2008-01-03 . chapter 1
Ahahahah! That was pretty funny...but if Katara knew I said that, if someone found me, I wouldn't even be identifiable by dental record.
iluvSokka46
2007-11-04 . chapter 1
hehe. zuko's haircut lol.
please continue this- i want to know how their date turns out!!
chocolatepen
2007-10-05 . chapter 1
dang, i can't wait till you upload more. i just loved college daze, and am a bit obsessed at the moment. thank you giving the world such an astonishing piece!
moor
2007-10-01 . chapter 1
Really well written, great set up!

... but I gotta admit, I'm finding the humour is a bit flat & that it's missing your usual flair -- it's coming off as predictable... and almost boring. ^^; (Sorry!)

Looking forward to more, though, since I know it's just a matter of getting back on your feet again & finding the groove -- and I hope Lotus is coming along well! :D

Take care! Thanks for sharing!
bianca
2007-10-01 . chapter 1
Sokka has to do stupid again poor Zuko. anyways love your writing but can't you come up with a sequel please :) that would be so cool
Katinka
2007-09-27 . chapter 1
Is this really a one shot? you should write a second part for this chapter! that would be really cool!
ALISHA
2007-09-27 . chapter 1
i really love your writing, hope to see more sonn!
BonitaChickia
2007-09-26 . chapter 1
aw so cute!! i think that it was just right and o so adorable! awesome job cant wait for more installments! :-D
Ellie
2007-09-25 . chapter 1
Very nice, very nice indeed. But too short! Agh! I want more ...
GirlCat817
2007-09-24 . chapter 1
just right. exceptionally cute and I am eager to see any more to come
inky-yemil
2007-09-24 . chapter 1
i think it's a fantastic idea to finish of a great fic, go for it!!
wastelander1230
2007-09-24 . chapter 1
its good and keep thinking about a proper sequel i would realy like it
Legacy of the Avatar
2007-09-24 . chapter 1
I like it! Poor Zuko...
crash and burnn
2007-09-23 . chapter 1
all i got to say is ha ha aha ha ah ha lol. let me guess episode zukos tale inspired this chapter right. so i basically get the idea of what he looks like. i look forward to the next one.
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