this is really good, and so incredibly sweet

Raine

good stoy about that movie jurasic park.

MORE!

Well I'm glad she was saved

Great chapter.

Excellentee! Keep it up!

update? please?
I want to know how this works out. it's interesting.

I like this update soon will you

so cool!!
it would be awesome if more ppl came to the island like in the last movie!
update soon, I'll be waiting!!

Oh I love this chapter. I especially love the part where she says he deserved a hug LOL and then when she was naming two of the raptors. That sounds like something I would do. Actually, I'd probably name every dinosaur that I saw on the island. lol
ROFL
I love this

Hehe. I already see those two (Dawn and ''Sly'' standing near each other yelling, ''MINE!'' to the world :P. I'm waiting for your update!

Bye,
Lisette

Is the Raptor falling in love with human?
Anyway I really like your story and raptors are my favorite dinosaurs.

nice story

I love this story very much! Keep it up! :)

Still a little too short but I liked it. I wonder how this will turn out, maybe somewhat like my story perhaps. I hope you update soon.