Nice story, though by chance is your story inspired by "Mayonaka no Yaji-san Kita-san"? lol, I'm seeing a lot of similarities! :D

BAHAHA thank you for involving the Lobelia girls in a way that did NOT involve Haruhi at all. xD

OH MY GOSH! That is one awesome story XD LoveitLoveitLoveitLoveitLoveitLoveitLoveitLoveitLoveitLoveit
Could you write another one where Tetsuya and Kasanoda actually get together? LOVE IT! Please write more XD

aw, was it all a fever dream? What a cop out! XD No, I kid. This story needed the most reasonable conclusion attainable. I can't believe its over after all this time! OH, THOSE WACKY SPACE TWINS, LOL! What a ride!

Don't be so hard on yourself! You wrapped the story up very very nicely. I as a reader feel very snug. :D The reveal made everything make so much more sense! I was starting to worry of drifting characterization, however if it was all strictly from the mind of Tetsuya then~ -hee- it's good. So Tetsuya had overreacted to the scuffle with his dad that was a relief to see. Oh those Edo twins. XD As usual your dialogue is really well done and the action, while wordy, is well-thought out and planned. I think that this story is quite the accomplishment. I could never write as fast or as clear as you do. I'd like to ask if you planned how the story would go or if you left it to wherever the wind took you chapter to chapter because I think it'd be more cohesive if you had written it with a stronger central idea. I did love all the little details and quirks that made it so interesting, but when I pull back it really did give the impression of snippets of a dream since the plot itself was all over the place. If that was intentional, then I'd like to say congrats on leaving a tangible impression of what Tetsuya felt like at the end. My brain. XD

HEY LOOK ITS MORI! And also? HOT BOY MAKIN OUTS! awright! I can't tell if this is the end or not though. Or if not, its probably nearing its comletion, now that they're reunited and on their way to Ise.

Hooh~ I still think Tetsuya's coming back to life. This chapter was all sorts of awkward though. It must've been really hard to write. I was kinda put-off by the way Tetsuya used 'don't kill him because we'll disappear' excuse, but then made Kasanoda let them go. And I thought to myself his dad was ok with that? The confession was done well if anti-climatically, which fits I think. I wanted to know why there was such a large gap in the middle of the story when Tetsuya was about to explain what happened. I almost thought scenes shifted to hell or wherever Tetsuya's spirit is at the moment. You may also want to comb through to proofread a bit more as there were a couple of careless mistakes. However! I'd love to see the rest of the ends tied up properly. :D Descending action is a go~~

ahh, the truth comes out! But damn though, your boned bow.
...damn that rainbow trail!

I've been waiting for the big reveal about the Sendou boss! I've been following this fic for a while, but I don't think I've ever commented, so: I really enjoy the weirdness of the encounters on the road, the bits of gangster that comes out in Tetsuya and the soft-heartedness from Kasanoda, and the humour of all this.

I really enjoyed the detail you gave to the story, though sometimes it was a little too verbose. It did fit the old man's character, but Kasanoda was speaking almost too eloquently. XD; It did resolve itself halfway down, but now I want to know what happens with the sudden appearance of the Sendou-gumi boss! :DD Can't wait. Also, sheer genius on the creation of the drink that causes the hallucination of a loved one who becomes self-aware. Freaking genius. XD

\o/ WHOO! How trippy! I was almost disappointed for the "It-was-all-a-dream" cliche, but hey! I loved how it turned out not that way at all. And Ringo seems to be Eclair Tonnerre? The opera glasses! Though I never pinned her as a fangirl. Hmm.. so tha's why I doubt myself. Anyway! The choppy surreality that you waffled into the beginning was a nice change from the usual flow and I feel sorry for Tetsuya being surrounded by the spirits and forced into a game. :3

:O ! NO! TETSUYA
I was very absorbed in this chapter. Tamaki doppelganger appears! Aweome. -clicky-

XD I'm trying to find something to improve on and I don't see anything. Keep up this good pacing and ingenuity and thing's'll be great!

Whoa! I was not expecting this at all. :D I really liked how the Akus were trailing the to and we get to see the reactions of the characters the guys have seen already! :) And the pacing was fantastic. Soran bushi is really addictive. XD I hope I haven't fallen in love with enka!

Oo! Not every day I learn something new! :D :D -looks up the dancing and imagines Tetsuya and Kasanoda performing- XD Wow. Nice~~ I am a bit surprised that Ranka didn't comment on the 'aah'ing, even though Oharu is completely wooden at it. :3 Tetsuya admits his love!! Will he admit to anything else?! STAY TUNED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER of &(@*&#!! :D