Uhg! You can't stop now! It was so sad to see that you haven't updated this story since last August! I know it's pestering to ask that you update. I know I hate it when people bother me about it, but yeah... please update!

no, what happens next?!?!

ah a sequel! You're gonna be the death of me! *dives in*

Now you MUST update! Cookies, candy anything if you do! *sad face* not even for your 400th and 200th reviewer *makes rabbiroo face*?

Love the last line. Funny how the only girl Yukio loves is the only one who hates him. I want to know more about Tinn, Kim and Lily now! PLEASE UPDATE! Cookies if you do. Don't make this one of the stories left unfinished or only updated sporadically.

Did I mention how I love that this is a drabble series so that it's shorter and easier to read? Update soon? I can see it's not 'complete' yet.

I just discovered this sequel! Liking it so far and excited for the rest...

Oh noes! Don't let Yukio die, he's so cool! This has been just as interesting as 'Parts of a Whole'. I love this. Update soon, please!

I love Sokka's way of confronting Zuko about the dream. You got a lot of humor and seriousness in there and it was all great: the lead up, the stand off, and then the final “I'm not unfunny and boring.” :)

I really liked how you wrote Taoki and Kenya's thoughts on returning to their home. A lot of tension there, the predicament with Lin aside.

“I love you. Please don’t die.” Finally she admits it, hopefully it sticks if (when, it better be 'when') Yukio gets better.

Awesome as always, looking forward to what you have planned next so update when you have the time :)

sorry i haven't reviewed in a while.

so she finally loves him but still no kissing! lol.

chin and suki i like.

zuko and sokka conversation was really good. am i wrong thinking that maybe zuko's dream really was a premonition?

good suspense but too long to update. i forget what happened before. sorry to complain but seriously you need to post faster.

Hey again, MacFie! Just wanted to comment on how happy I was to see a new chapter ^_^. Your conversation between Zuko and Sokka was just beautiful, and so was that little part at the end. And geez, you're subplot with Taoki and Lin is really picking up in the suspense edge! I really can't wait to see more. :D

And here I thought things were calming down a bit last chapter. Silly me. Cho Sung's developing into a fine villain in his own right, and then we've got the tension between the twins, the well-meaning schemings of a certain box-man, and Yukio's still sliced up six ways from Sunday.
I'm definitely looking forward to how these various arcs get resolved, and your OC cast continues to perform flawlessly. I like Zuko as well, although his character seems a bit static considering several years have gone by since the end of the war. Maybe it's just me.
Wonderful chapter, and good luck on future installments!
--NullChronicler--

Whaa!? Is something going to happen to the baby? Augh!
You just had to end on a cliffhanger, didn't you?
Update soon please!

Woo-hoo! I have been anxious for another chapter from you and its finally here :)

Aang's relationship with the Guru is hilarious; I love that he is so annoyed by the old guy. “No gurus allowed.” That totally cracked me up :D

“All other moments are spent either eating or interrogating. Sometimes both at the same time, which is highly disconcerting to the terrified prisoners being questioned.”

Haha, I can only imagine ;)

I liked Ty Lee's family history, her being a fraction Air Nomad fell right into place with her character.

Well this is just -great-. Nightmare sequence and Zuko is forced to choose Katara or his unborn son. I'm telling myself its only a dream, but you've got me doubting. :(

Wow. So, everything's coming back together, huh? Suki, Chin, and the rest of the search party are closing in on Yukio and Lily, while Vallon is (maybe) pulling out of his injuries at last. And if Katara dies during pregnancy I will be extremely irritated with you. That being said, she's not going to fare much better in my story--which WILL be continued as soon as I can figure out a way to end the arena battle. Oh, and my next DP chapter has about half a page left and it's done, so I'll hopefully have it up in a few days at worst.
Anyways, another wonderful chapter, and I'll see ya next chapter!
--NullChronicler--