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| Fenix Cole 2008-09-21 ch 1,  | abusedude...seriously, you need to spell check, finish your sentances and re-read your story to make sure it makes sense. but other than that, it's pretty good. but seriously, the grammer, punctuation, and spelling isn't, ahem, good. |
| Radio Driver 2008-09-16 ch 12, | abuseGood goin, Emma. Keep on keepin on. |
| AshK 2008-09-15 ch 12, | abuseNice work as always! Keep up the great work! Sincerely, AshK |
| AshK 2008-09-09 ch 11, | abuseNice update as always! Keep up the great work! Sincerely, AshK |
| Lady Dragon010 2008-07-07 ch 10, | abuseThis is vary confusing but funny and good. please continue.(Aqua Girl) |
| AshK 2008-06-09 ch 10, | abuseNice update as always! Keep up the great work! Sincerely, AshK |
| LuffysAngel 2008-06-08 ch 10, | abuseUpdate soon. ^_^ |
| GammaTron 2008-05-27 ch 9, | abuseArtic: YOU PUT NARUTO INTO FOUR-TAILED STATE?! Rico(Age 3): That bad? Me: When Naruto goes into his Fourth-tailed state... then all Heck brakes loose. Artic: He's worse than me when I took crack. Rcio: You mean when you were on the floor, hugging a pillow saying 'Gov'ment came and took ma baby!' thing? Artic: Yes. Me: Jiraya's corrupting Baroque Works with his books... *Snicker* For once, no one's beating him down... yet... Artic: And I agree on that 'show'... *Shudders* Rico: What show? Is there candy? Artic: Not that kind of show, Pup. All three: Great Story! Keep on Writing! |
| LuffysAngel 2008-05-26 ch 9, | abuseGreat chapter, please update as soon as you can! ^_^ |
| AshK 2008-05-26 ch 9, | abuseWow! Long time no update on this one! Nice to see that you're keeping this one up. Keep up the great work! Sincerely, AshK |
| Zoro 2008-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseDefiantly - characterized by defiance; boldly resistant or challenging Definitely - in a definite manner; unambiguously; unequivocally; positively Wrong: ... said the 4th who was defiantly a girl... Correct: ... said the fourth who was definitely a girl... |
| Devil Hinata 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseI like ur story. |
| Purple Moonshine 2007-12-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseM Kisame. Oh snap I acted like a fangirl for moment. Anyway Continue I have to see the conclusion. |
| Purple Moonshine 2007-12-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh WOW I Really Like I 8D |
| SaruKaze 2007-11-03 ch 8, | abusehahah you did a great job with tobi Lmao *gets thrown in the air* whe! |