Oh, please, update, update, update... I love the complexity of this story, the twining storylines coming together to form a story of great depth. Bring it on! You've scratched the surface, let's see more!

parseltongue on another planet?

Intresting. BlackJack will be even more dangerous now :)

Is there going to be a update to this?

hee hee hee!

I love your story and I'm happy to see that Ron is potried as a friend it's refreshing. :D

Really enjoying this story - can't wait to read more.

Brilliant! I can totally see Sirius in Jack:)

Excellent story.

Just deserts...love the story so far. I hope Harry advances some, his hopeless and unmotivated little boy act in annoying. Why in the hell has he never taken his studies seriously? He has someone trying to kill him and his friends. I guess he wants them to die. That is the only thing I can think when I read J.K.'s stories.

are you ever going to update?

i likey. keep it up.
Evyo

OMG! so where is Harry from? is that writing from that planet that they went to with the radiation? well, maybe not. but i can't wait to see where this is going!

I am so happy you updated it is a great story!! I can't wait to see what Jack will do to the Dursleys . Is dudley getting cought because of jack? so many ideas so many places for the mind togo. UPdate soon pleaase.!

this is really good, i like the new element with Harry being able to read some top secret script. it has a really interesting plot, an i have no idea what will happen next, i love that.