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MidnightFox
2009-09-07 . chapter 9
wow so i have to say this story was extremely well written with its creativity and discription. freaked me the f* out, lol
takuya
2009-08-07 . chapter 9
oh that chapter was really good and a new plot twist i so loved it, well not the them taking naruto part but the other bits were good
IvvyMoon
2009-08-06 . chapter 9
What does Orochimaru or whoever this person is want with Naruto? You and your damn addictive, fascinating plots. *mutters*

While I didn't think you had really killed Naruto, that genjutsu was crazy. I was like, what? Oh no! Naruto can survive anything right? Even being shredded? What the hell is she doing to Naruto?

Lol, and then I was better.

The only part that I thought needed a little bit more was their reaction to Naruto's kidnapping, especially considering what Sasuke saw in that genjutsu he was caught in. I realize he didn't actually tell Sakura what he thought he saw, but I would think they would both feel more concerned about the fact that Orochimaru wants Naruto. Sasuke was in the way. He wasn't kidnapped or tortured or anything, just killed quickly - or at least, that's what his would-be-murderer thought. Unless he knew Sasuke wouldn't die... But anyway, what is going to happen to Naruto?!?!?!?
Jellybean06
2009-08-06 . chapter 9
thanks for the update!

this chapter really took me by surprise...i didn't expect anything that happened. the plot thickens deliciously, it seems. i can't wait to read what happens next.
Jellybean06
2009-07-26 . chapter 8
i love all the details you put in your stories, like the mythology in this one, that make them more real and interesting. all the little things really count.

anyway, i can't wait to read what happens next. you have me in suspense about my favorite pairing as well as the actual plot :D

update soon! please?
Belle Mort 13
2009-06-21 . chapter 8
Hey Animeaddict6 kiss kiss

i reviwed this on A.F.F so there

may the darkness Protect you and the light Bless you

Belle M
DemonicKitsune-chan
2009-06-03 . chapter 8
OMG! This story is Amazing!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ^^
d.k.-chan
diamondkat12
2009-04-01 . chapter 8
I really love this story. I love vampire stories but can't always find good ones. You are doing a great job with this story.
takuya
2009-03-31 . chapter 8
wow that chapter was total great, i love this story so much i just cant get enought of it
Byzantea
2009-01-15 . chapter 7
YAYZ! Awsum story! ^_^
redfoxrose
2009-01-08 . chapter 7
No- don't be an idiot Sasuke! No more betrayal!

Hopefully he will think about this more. And if he does meet with these people, it will be to trick them and find out who they are.

I hope he tells Naruto. But that won't happen unless Naruto remembers. But he could find a way to get info to someone that people are planning a coup or something.

Stupid Sakura. She doesn't understand what's going on and only believes the worst in Sasuke.

I hope Naruto doesn't tell her, but maybe if he does then it will help- but she will think bad things...

I'm so nervous...

But whatever happens Sasuke is very strong, so he can get away from anything. (I hope- no I know!)

I can't wait to read more.
takuya
2009-01-08 . chapter 7
oh i really liked that chapter a lot total cant wait for more
lazeee an demented
2009-01-08 . chapter 7
Ah! I'm so glad you updated. Iwish the chapter was longer but i suppose now you have people forcing you to write there will be more updates. \o/
threeBOWLSofRAMEN
2008-12-23 . chapter 3
'Naruto matching three bowls of miso pork ramen to Sasuke’s one bowl of tofu veggie.'

cuss three bowls of ramen
are better then one ^^
NekoKriszty
2008-11-18 . chapter 6
Hi! GREAT chapter!! I didn't really expect Naruto to get bitten again THAT fast... But Sasuke... He's not cruel! I have a feeling he's just trying to protect Naruto. Getting blood sucked from and involuntary erections every 2-3 days could be bad for one's system. XD

Ooh, sending you an email right now. I'd love to help you with your research. ^^

Update as soon as you manage! I can't wait to read some more!!
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