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| skopde 2008-02-22 ch 9,  | abuseFantastic story. Can´t w8 to see next chapter. |
| ParadiseLost23 2008-01-16 ch 9, | abusegreat chapter |
| kellysixx 2007-12-31 ch 9, | abuseomg i just found this story and..LOVE IT ! I hope there is tons of paire coming up, eh if HRG has problem just kill him off. ( JUST KIDDING), no seriously..lol I like the dialogue in the emails, it is very entertaining. I can't wait for more updates and pairey goodness...!! :) |
| Penman Specialist 2007-12-27 ch 9, | abuseSorry I was unclear. It's not the greatest action story in Heroes fandom (though it is good) but it's one of the best drama/romances. (and that IS the genre) I guess I missed it (in your fic)...how are they (Nathan and Peter) not related? I was aware of the rest (from the show) Another great chapter! Please continue! |
| Penman Specialist 2007-12-17 ch 8, | abuseGreat job! Not the greatest pof action, but as a drama/romance, it is fabulous. Tell me that somehow they prove they are not related. Please. It'd also *hinthint* provide a good cliffhanger as to who IS her dad. |
| A9L9O8N7E 2007-12-07 ch 8, | abusei just read the whole story so far and it is great! Please continue, I really would like to find out what happens next and see the peter/claire relationship develop! |
| j 2007-12-07 ch 8, anon. | abusegreat story continue |
| a-broken-teen 2007-12-03 ch 8, | abuseomg! this is great you have got to update soon it rocks! |
| doornumberthree 2007-11-20 ch 8, | abuseVery interesting... I've been hoping that either Nathan or Peter was adopted for a very long time, because I love Paire but can't stand incest! Lol. I was glad to read this. |
| buwahahagrl 2007-11-11 ch 8, anon. | abuseI CANT believe you wouldn't update until 2009! And leave me at such a cliffhanger I'm so hurt and offended(no not really I'm just trying to be over dramatic...)but I can't wait for the next chap and I'm so happy Paire aren't related I officially love you!OK I don't love you but I'm very happy! :) So you better update soon or I'll stick Peter on you! |
| Anna 2007-11-11 ch 8, anon. | abuseLove it. Please update soon! :) |
| Tamara 2007-11-10 ch 8, anon. | abusePeter handled Mohinder's bitterness very well. Now Peter has two people to worry about. |
| buwahahagrl 2007-10-28 ch 7, anon. | abuseYou left me on such a cliffhanger I can't wait for the next chap hopefully some more Paire too! :) |
| heyrawind41 2007-10-27 ch 7, | abusePeter's mom can not die. She just cant. That funeral is like my Grandmothers except the guy who owns the funeral service (is that a priest? idk) was the only one who did a speech about her, Amazing Grace was sang before the service started (not by person but by CD). Also a casket was there. But the applaud. Was is a clapp applaud or was it agreeing to what he said applaud? Because clapping in a funeral is just not what should happen. No one is not in the mood for that in a funeral. Sorry if I flame, its just if i hear funeral i just remember Grandmother's, Grandma Kitty's (great-grandma), and Paw-Paw's (great-grandpa) funeral and they were very emotional. Okay back to reviewing. DONT let Peter's mom die. they just went through a funeral. |
| san01 2007-10-24 ch 6, | abuseWOW THE STORY IS AMAZING. UPDATE SOON. |