I liked the chapters with Qui-Gon and Tahl.

These are really good.

that was pretty good, short, but still good.

Each one is so different but well done. Very beautiful. I think the Anakin one was also the hardest for me. He is such an ignorant jerk so it was difficult to read.

I do think that you have well caught the characters though and kept them in step. Siri had a hard decision to make too and understood that though they loved each other, they loved the Jedi more.

Utterly and beautifully divine...I really like the rebellious yet resigning attitude to it...
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I'm not sure where I stand on the Tahl-Force-ghost front, although it does make a lot of sense considering the end of A Call To Vengeance, but anyway, I really liked this chapter! I thought it actually summed up the whole of the Jedi lifestyle because of Qui-Gon's thoughts on the friends he'd lost over the years; it wasn't just about death, but about life aswell! All of these were great and thanks very much for sharing!

A very good insight into Anakin's thoughts then, and I think that was probably how he saw things at that point. Although I have to admit I quite Anakin, not particularly from the films, because when I watched them I didn't like him at all, but I recently read through Jedi Quest and that put a completely different spin on his character for me. And that actually makes this chapter even more sad because you can see how far he's fallen! On to the last chapter!

I really like this chapter as well and you are very good at writing Siri! I really love the fact that she wants to be different from the other Jedi Masters, it seems very much like her and of course she did end up quite different from them! So a great chapter!

This one was great as well. I love the fact that she knows she should have realised something about Qui-Gon's feelings. It's a really interesting way of looking at ignorance and what it can mean to be ignorant!

Great chapter! I thought you captured Obi-Wan's indecision and the waring feelings going on inside him perfectly!