 S J Smith 2009-11-03 . chapter 3Hee, the last one with Ed's hair is very cute. We all know Ed's particular about his hair! :D |
 kenkao7rocks5forever 2009-06-17 . chapter 4Pfft - that was such a sweet treat! Apple pie~~ Ed and Winry!
Faving you. XD |
 CreativebutLazy 2009-05-08 . chapter 4I really liked this one, that's actually really like Ed to do something like that. |
 CreativebutLazy 2009-05-08 . chapter 3You know, I always did wonder how Ed could have his hair in a braid so often, but every time we see him with his hair down it's perfectly strait. I'm kind of ashamed of myself now that alchemy of all things never crossed my mind. Anyway nice. |
 KatsyKat 2009-05-06 . chapter 4Adorable! Loved it! |
 Took-Baggins 2009-05-05 . chapter 4aw, how cute! ^_^ JUST GIVE THE POOR BOY HIS PIE! he deserves it! come to think of it, i wonder why he didn't get any in the first place? was she just trying to aggravate him? |
 Legendary Chimera 2009-05-05 . chapter 4Bwahahaha, Al! I loved the scene at the graves. |
 Automailjunkie44 2009-05-05 . chapter 4Haha love ur fic its cute :) Keep up the great work :) |
 LittleChemist 2009-05-05 . chapter 4wow i missed these, glad your wrote some more, they are nie and Edward is totoally disgusting; that would be comething he would do the greedy little freak, yet so dense, go Winry for going again, they both needed that! |
 AliasAurora 2009-05-05 . chapter 4Cute! EdWin forever! (Man, it's hard to type with one hand occupied by my morning coffee.) If they were to kiss in the series I can totally see it going down like this. |
 Fantasy Fan Girl 2008-07-02 . chapter 3hehehe, that was amusing. It's so true though about your hair being wavy whenever you pull it down from a braid. It always happens to me, and now I'm rambleing, I really need to stop doing that. Anyway, the story was short sweet and to the point. Good work. Keep writing.
FFG- Jo |
 InfinityOnTheRun 2008-06-09 . chapter 1I thought the lady was Izumi at first xD |
 ehxhfdl14 2008-04-23 . chapter 3Aah, it's been a long time, has it not?
Very cute story. It is easy to forget that Ed is a kid, after all. But some little moments are telling, and those may be one of the most precious.
Sorry, had to bug you with this again DX
she would have through a wrench at him>> would have /thrown/ |
 Katie B18 2008-04-23 . chapter 3cute! =) |
 Legendary Chimera 2008-04-20 . chapter 3Bwahahha! This makes me laugh even more so because I have known guys who groomed themselves more them my sisters. And they think they're divas. *head/desk* I tend to think Al will be pickier with what he wears when he's restored though. |