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S J Smith
2009-11-03 . chapter 3
Hee, the last one with Ed's hair is very cute. We all know Ed's particular about his hair! :D
kenkao7rocks5forever
2009-06-17 . chapter 4
Pfft - that was such a sweet treat! Apple pie~~ Ed and Winry!
Faving you. XD
CreativebutLazy
2009-05-08 . chapter 4
I really liked this one, that's actually really like Ed to do something like that.
CreativebutLazy
2009-05-08 . chapter 3
You know, I always did wonder how Ed could have his hair in a braid so often, but every time we see him with his hair down it's perfectly strait. I'm kind of ashamed of myself now that alchemy of all things never crossed my mind. Anyway nice.
KatsyKat
2009-05-06 . chapter 4
Adorable! Loved it!
Took-Baggins
2009-05-05 . chapter 4
aw, how cute! ^_^ JUST GIVE THE POOR BOY HIS PIE! he deserves it! come to think of it, i wonder why he didn't get any in the first place? was she just trying to aggravate him?
Legendary Chimera
2009-05-05 . chapter 4
Bwahahaha, Al! I loved the scene at the graves.
Automailjunkie44
2009-05-05 . chapter 4
Haha love ur fic its cute :) Keep up the great work :)
LittleChemist
2009-05-05 . chapter 4
wow i missed these, glad your wrote some more, they are nie and Edward is totoally disgusting; that would be comething he would do the greedy little freak, yet so dense, go Winry for going again, they both needed that!
AliasAurora
2009-05-05 . chapter 4
Cute! EdWin forever! (Man, it's hard to type with one hand occupied by my morning coffee.) If they were to kiss in the series I can totally see it going down like this.
Fantasy Fan Girl
2008-07-02 . chapter 3
hehehe, that was amusing. It's so true though about your hair being wavy whenever you pull it down from a braid. It always happens to me, and now I'm rambleing, I really need to stop doing that. Anyway, the story was short sweet and to the point. Good work. Keep writing.

FFG- Jo
InfinityOnTheRun
2008-06-09 . chapter 1
I thought the lady was Izumi at first xD
ehxhfdl14
2008-04-23 . chapter 3
Aah, it's been a long time, has it not?
Very cute story. It is easy to forget that Ed is a kid, after all. But some little moments are telling, and those may be one of the most precious.

Sorry, had to bug you with this again DX
she would have through a wrench at him>> would have /thrown/
Katie B18
2008-04-23 . chapter 3
cute! =)
Legendary Chimera
2008-04-20 . chapter 3
Bwahahha! This makes me laugh even more so because I have known guys who groomed themselves more them my sisters. And they think they're divas. *head/desk* I tend to think Al will be pickier with what he wears when he's restored though.
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