LOL. Good story. Although, the whole Ash/Paul thing kinda disturbed, i still found it funny anyways. Ashachu stories are always fun. And Lilly, she's a rather interesting character that it's good so see make an appearence from again.

cool story plz more and soon plz

Dude that was f'in hilarious!! It served that douchebag Paul right after being such a bastard on TV. Could you send me the link that had the picture on it in web address format? I tried typing it in but I kept making mistakes. Thanks in advance.

O_o

woah, I did not see that coming...

0_o *awkward laugh* at the beginning of the story i kinda thought...right...well, you got TF and TG in the same story... really awkwardly...you're just egging on the A.A.P.L.E.s, though.

This is a very great story and can't wait too read more when written!

*laugh* This is GOOD! And funny! Ah! Poor Lily!

wait...who's paul? is he that new guy in daimond and pearl?
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well, at least i got it! i thought it was pretty funny too! lol

anyway, u wrote this pretty well, im impressed. u kept a small suspence when u didn't tell the names of the two pikachus until the very end, which had the great impact of the humor. nice job! ^^

I LOVED this fic!

You did a great job on it, K.M.! ^_^


I'm surprised Ash would actually want to help Lily out with *that spell* again, considering how freaked out he was the first time and everything, lol.

But yeah, Ash is a nice guy like that, so it does make sense. ^^


Hehe, the female Pikachu was really, really ** off about the spell. XD That seems like a perfect punishment for him though, turning him into a Pikachu - and one of a different gender as well. LOL!!

Ash going for race in the forest with Pikachu, that's perfectly in character for Ashachu! Aww, so cute! XD

Oh my, that was so great.

I see what you mean, when you said you liked Pikachu Ash in your Bayleef fanfic. XD

I had a feeling something was up when you didn't mention names. Truth be told that while I was suspecting Misty, amd 99% of people would have been guessing, I was honestly thinking it was gonna turn out to be Brock. Heh. Nice bait and switch.

Hilarious. I love it.