oh yeah.

Forgot to mention that I love your choice of Teenagers for the chapter titles.

It really works well with the story.

Oh yeah.

Good job Sam :D

Make the crazy old bag feel like crap.

I'd have let her die too for treating Dean that way.

I can't believe they called him Goodwill.

That is just mean.

This is a good story.

Thanks for writing it :D

you know what i like? I like having an author on here i can go to and get anything and everything i've ever wanted in a fanfic.

and truer words have never been spoken.

Candy was a TOTAL BITCH! o_O She totally didn't get what should have been coming to her because in the process of almost getting it, her daughter died instead. NO! WHY? ;_;

Hahaha that bitch got what she deserved... I guess... I don't know- I think she should've suffered more. / She didn't really care about her daughter that much so I don't think that was enough of a punishment... But your story, so that's just how it goes. xP

soo youve probably forgotten about this story cuz its kinda old, but i just read it and it was so good! my favorite part was when dean said how do you get rid of a bully? and sam was like tell you? hahaha. but ya. good job :)

Go Dean!

Go Sam!

Oh now you've done it! I'm all choked up.

Much of this is very true, like the cruelty of children and the hierarchy of jr high. But here and there, it's just a touch over done. Like Sam just realizing that Dean can't hide his feelings from showing in his eyes. In the series, we see how Dean doesn't meet Sam's eyes when he doesn't want to let him inside of his walls. Even on those rare occasions when dean opens up just a bit, they aren't usually facing one another. It's very telling. So the embrace at the end of this chapter is very OOC. It would have seemed more Winchester to have Sam put his hand on Dean's shoulder there.

What a b*tch! But I'm even more eager to continue now!

One thing stood out as stilted to me. You refer to Dean as the "older man" an the "elder" a couple of times. While we all know he is older than Sam, he isn't even 30 here and these words struck me as the way you would describe someone past middle age.

But this is a very intriguing plot so onwards I go!

Dunno if I commented already, but just in case I forgot: fabulous.

A little wheepy, your Dean, but that's ok. I still cannot think about the uber-bitch in MY class without pure malice in my blood, so I totally understand how two years of terror can turn you into a mess.

So, fabulous!

And damn, I never even heard th song before that. Why the hell not, I like MCR...

What do I think? Well, wildly OOC, a cartoon villian, and a Dr. Phil ending. But the germ of a good story- Dean's outsider status as a kid- is in there.