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deadw8
2009-08-12 . chapter 2
no not gai
geetac
2009-08-06 . chapter 2
I like the chapters and want more of it.
DRARKER
2009-07-30 . chapter 2
HEY is super cool your story but...
can the story be with harem?
I don“t now Maybe be with Hinata, Haku and Anko
because naruto is the last one of his clan, But seriously I believe that your history will be super cool
TheOtaku Akatsuki
2009-06-29 . chapter 2
d crazy and insane as him!? where did the blu hair com from?
pantherjtg
2009-05-29 . chapter 1
I Like it more plese and if you do put a small harem put in Hinata,Tenten, & Isaribi.
Nikorasu Za Shugotenshi
2009-03-20 . chapter 2
love
FunnyLaugh
2009-01-27 . chapter 2
What the hell? Being related to Gai is not something most normal people would want!

-FunnyLaugh,
Will make you laugh funny.
Maloran
2009-01-20 . chapter 2
Naruto related to Gai... forget heads rolling, minds are going to explode.
rajvir
2009-01-15 . chapter 2
lol
Hawkgirl90
2008-10-14 . chapter 2
HA HE'S RELATED TO GAI!! ROFL. Forget Emo Kyo a Gai-ish Kyo would be so much worse *shudders* Unfortunately I can see it now GAI-SAMA! LEE-SENSEI! KYO! GAI-SENSEI! LEE-KUN! etc. *shudders again, twitch and bashing head to get rid of image* plz update soon and I'm begging NO MORE GAI-CLONES -- LEE'S ENOUGH!
Oathkeeper-Ryu
2008-09-07 . chapter 2
Oh dear god... a blond version of Lee running around.. AHH!
Primus2021
2008-08-04 . chapter 2
Who else is he related to?

Also could you add Hinata to a small NaruHearm (Haku Hinata and Temari) Later.

Primus2021
JovialShogun
2008-07-15 . chapter 2
He's related to Gai *GASP* ohmygoodnesspleasetellusmore!
trinity of babalon tower
2008-06-26 . chapter 2
you better update these storys damnit im getting realy ** and i wanna see the reaction of gai when he finds out so pleas hurry*gets on nees and into a pleading stance and says*pleas pleas pleaspleaspleaspleaspleaspleas update!
xxKumo's Red Hazexx
2008-06-09 . chapter 2
awsome work :D a good whell kin x naru or whill it be naru x haku later? whell its up to you and im gonna stay a fan of this work until i have read it complet :D


... i have a question are thu uchiha clan dead like in the anime with only itachi,sasuke (spoiler) and madara left? or are the whole clan still alive?
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