hey you updated on my birthday, anywayz great chappie...
update soon I really wanna know what happens next!!

Update! Update!

I thought Tifa was dead in your story. Tifa was the one who said "Stop Running" and ask him to save the children in the movie, right? She did it after Cloud awake, and at the movie she was alive. How come she had the dialogue when she was dead? She couldn't have said anything to Cloud.

I really liked how you managed to use lines from AC in this, it fits so well.
Actually, it's kinda scary how well it fits... :S
Anyways, I love the fact that it was Reno's PoV first *love* and now Vincent's *love love love*

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Your writing style has changed in this chapter (I thinks...) This is really sad!

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*cries*
wow. this was amazing. so beautiful and tragic but oh so good. i love ur writing. it's so tranquell and u write the characters really really well.

I'm really looking forward to any future chapters in this multi-chap. You were able to bend the dialogue to fit Tifa's death, but keeping it similar and very realistic at the same time. You translated Vincent's emotions from the movie very well onto paper, his character was very similar to that in DoC.
Thank you for this, this was a good chapter.

Well done

Wow that was amazing!
I wonder how Marlene and Denzel are going to take the news. I'm dying to know whats gonna happen!

Another stunning chapter. Update soon. This AU twist is really great!

Wow. I really liked Reno's perspective in this, and I can't wait to see what is up next. It's so sad, and Cloud's pain is so believable that I felt it. I've read your other two fics and they're so sad. But anyway, great start and I don't worry about updating. I know what you mean about not having time, so there's no pressure here. Great job.

Joey

Wow - i loved that this was from Reno's POV. It actually made it so good getting another perspective from someone a bit unusual.

I'm still trying to figure out the italics. I'm thinking its either Tifa, or possibly Aerith?

Great work!

I read the first two to this three-part one shot and they really got my heart twisting in sadness. Especially the first part, I really liked how you portrayed Tifa and her thoughts. Also, it's interesting that you used Reno's POV for this, it provides a different view of Cloud-Tifa's relationship from the other side of the fence. A sad conclusion, but still quite realistic. Loved the ending words, profound and true. Good job!

oh gosh, i cried...i cried a lot...but it was still really good.

Beautiful. Love Reno's pov. Perhaps the italics are Tifa? (But I kind of prefer the ambiguity)! I look forward to your next update!

yayy horkys back (if only for a bit ;) i thought you were dead! =P
anywho, great start! i like reading things from renos pov its interesting :D cant wait for an update :)