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MUF'O
2009-06-21 . chapter 1
LEON AND ADA WON'T GET BACK TOGETHER, BUT ANY WAY IT'S WHAT YOU GUY'S THINK - FAIR ENOUGH !!. BUT I THINK, THEY WON'T - BECAUSE LEON JUST STARTED TO DATE HUNNINGAN, BEFORE RE, 4 AND A YEAR AFTER, RE - 4 HE STARTED TO BE WITH, ANGELA - IN RESIDENT EVIL: DEGENERATION. ALSO HE'LL BE STILL WITH HER - NOW, NOT ADA - AS HE'S MOVED ON. BUT ADA HAS GONE, ONTO WESKER - BUT NOW HE'S DEAD, AFTER RESIDENT EVIL 5 - ADA WILL FIND SOME ONE ELSE.
SO GOOD LUCK TO LEON, WITH ANGELA !.
ALSO GOOD LUCK, TO ADA - FINDING SOME ONE ELSE OR STAYING SINGLE !.
ANYWAY THAT WAS A GOOD STORY - THOUGH, BUT WITH LEON - IT COULD BE ANGELA AND WITH ADA IT COULD BE WESKER, BEFORE HE DIE'S - IN RE, 5 !!.
Cloudysmile
2008-12-20 . chapter 24
When will you upload this story ? I can't to watch it now! please hurry up!
EmeraldFang
2008-06-28 . chapter 24
Wow this is actually pretty good, I hope you update soon.
Satanic Park Of Madness
2008-05-26 . chapter 24
Just thought you would like to know that am reading this and enjoying it. I'm not too bothered about the grammar issues and the cosntant mispellings. This is a avery great stroy and it msut of took you quite some time to dedicate yourself into answering as much of the question the RE games have not answered as possible.
Keep it up. oh and are Ada and Leon gona mess around?
Anubyte
2008-05-15 . chapter 24
I am a fan of this story and I feel that you have taken the plot and done wonders with it, but I feel that you have put too much emphasis and the whole honey, sweetie, sexy, cute foot thing. Leon sounds like a 16 year old virgin trying desperately to get some puss, suceeds and now is the typical horney teenager that thinks of nothing else. Being married to a hot ** woman myself, lol couples really don't talk like that the whole time. And being kicked with a "cute foot" all the time starts to take away from whats going on sometimes I think. Especially with the creative battle scenes you have written.
Tzeentch
2008-05-03 . chapter 24
that part with the doors was pretty funny. Doesn't this make Nikoli infected now? I'm pretty sure hunter scratches transfer the disease, unless the "wolverine" hunter is slightly different... Maybe could make finding cure for Nikoli in next chapter
Ralf Jones
2008-05-03 . chapter 24
MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, SUCKERS!


Nicholai is so damn funny!


Keep going!
icewine2000
2008-05-03 . chapter 24
New chapter's up, Great!

Finally, General Zhao gets his evil hands on General Wong, but General Wong wouldn't be killed, would he?

Nicholai part is like playing around. For fun.

The section that Leon mistakes Ada and Sherry's bed is a little...abrupt. Because in the former chapter, they just get in the basement, observing the circumstances, then suddenly, Leon is sucking the girl's toe and we know the three are spending the night there together, plus Ada and Sherry change the bed. Why do they need to change the bed down there? And apparently Leon doesn't sleep at the same time as Ada and Sherry, so he goes to the wrong bed. What is he doing in the dark when those two are sleeping? Being a night watchman? The link between former chapter and this part is kind of lost. Maybe some information can be added in former chapter to lead in this one more smoothly.
icewine2000
2008-03-07 . chapter 23
What? No more updates for months? I'm still waiting for the next chapter!

Okay, here's my thought of the story...

It seems General Zhao knows things about Ada and Sherry. He won't easily let Sherry go this way. Perhaps he will use the chance to arrest them both, and shift the blame of the city fall to Wesker, because they all know what Wesker's doing. He's the one easy to be blamed for. Or instead of arresting anyone, General Zhao releases some BOWs to tackle with the people he hates. Anyway, he will take chances to do something for revenge, no matter sacrifice how many lives. Eventually maybe Colonel Lee will be involved in his conspiracy. There's a huge possibility that he will be used by other people because of his hatred, but I don't think his intention of revenge is as strong as General Zhao. He's just a guy who can't accept being a loser in a love war (even though Ada never has that feeling for him). Maybe Leon and him will meet again by accident, alone in some place, and they will talk about things between them and Ada. There's one thing for sure: they all get chances to confront BOWs.

China part is my favorite. I think it's a cool idea moving the "scene" to China rather than remaining in America. It appears that Sand City is going to be another Raccoon City. Where's Saddler now? Does he plan to go to US? His "enemies" are all out of Europe now. What's he gonna do? He's still there?

Another question is: If Ada and Sherry are superhuman, their eyes are like Wesker's too? If so, Ada will be easily recognized unless she keeps wearing sunglasses, or contact lenses...Sherry may need to think this before she goes to college.

Character development is strong in this story. I like that. That's what the game lacks.

By the way, the plot that Leon is ripped off by the merchant is amusing.
NobodytoKnow
2008-02-20 . chapter 23
hey i like this story ;) you have to update new chapters soon!!
I want to know what happens to Leon and Ada ( what else ) ^^
SilverAegis
2008-01-13 . chapter 23
Eh, nice fic.
Houshin
2008-01-10 . chapter 23
Hey please continue it I want to know that it is going to happen in the next chapter. By the way do not leave the part of Leon and Ada is my favorite. Bye, Houshin
icewine2000
2007-12-28 . chapter 20
I'm just looking for fictions about RE4 afterwards and find this story. I like the way things going, although at first I don't really appreciate the relationship between characters (I think the relationship between Leon and Ada should be more nervous, anxious and implicit). But I'm happy to see the couples being together. Hope you can finish it, I really want to see the ending. Keep going!
Ralf Jones
2007-12-15 . chapter 23
Nice!

This is geting really intense!


The Tyrant is soo funny!


keep going!


Nicholai and Hunk rule!
TheGreyMan
2007-12-08 . chapter 23
Great Story ! Please keep updating

Please more Chris and Jill !
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