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| beamingatyou 2008-03-01 ch 27, | abuseWhew, that was a long read. I love this story. I don't know what to say, though. It took me awhile to read, because my brother downloaded all this spyware, that gives me popups every few minutes. Arugh. Hmm.. I wish I could do the lift-one-eyebrow thing.. I should go practice. ;D I hope you update soon. |
| -naiteki-kyuuri- 2008-01-17 ch 26, | abuseThis is a really good story. Sad and all, but I really like it. It doesnt really sound like everything's going to get better in the end, but I hope it does. |
| Gaara-Kaibutsu 2008-01-14 ch 26, | abuseThis gets better and better with every chapter. I say I'll be terribly disappointed when it's over. =3 |
| numberXoneXshannonXmooreXfa... 2007-12-30 ch 22, | abusethat is really good keep up the good work most stories are crap but this one is really good i hope you can reach 30 chapters if not more |
| numberXoneXshannonXmooreXfa... 2007-12-28 ch 21, | abuseit's getting dramatic because it needs to be its called writers intuition duh |
| numberXoneXshannonXmooreXfa... 2007-12-27 ch 20, | abuseOMG NOODLE GOT HER PREGNANT! no it was russel NO IT WAS 2D! Hannibal died didn't he or maybe it was the news that she was pregnant that caused her to go blank |
| Gaara-Kaibutsu 2007-12-27 ch 20, | abuseAH NU not the cliffies! *whines* Update...sonish? Pretty please with whipcream and cherries on top? Especially the cherries those are delicious. =3 |
| numberXoneXshannonXmooreXfa... 2007-12-20 ch 19, | abusewow thats a really great story im so hooked on it can't wait till you update wonder what happened to rachel? did noodles go into 2d's bedroom and catch them in the act then beat the holy hell out of rachel? or perhaps it was ol' mudsie? |
| Gaara-Kaibutsu 2007-11-29 ch 16, | abuseI'm still lovin' it and I'd write more but I'm in school so I cannot. Hope you get more reviews this time. |
| Gaara-Kaibutsu 2007-11-27 ch 15, | abuseI'm reading still =3 Or rather just started reading and like it a whole lot. 'tis a good story. |
| Lelo 2007-10-27 ch 10, anon. | abuseI am very much surprised that more had not reviewed. I have followed the story from posting of chapter one, and must say I highly enjoy it! Such confusion in chapter 10 with emotions, though. Very reasonable setup for some serious drama. XD Oh please keep going! |
| Gem Of The Stars 2007-10-27 ch 10, | abuse-licks lips and turns to VilleMuse- mm... bloodlust to Apocalyptica... come on darling -drags him away and shouts over shoulder- thanks for the update! |
| zombiepop69 2007-10-14 ch 8, | abuseplease don't stop writing! i'm just getting into it! let us atleast meet your version of the infamous Hannibal Niccals! |
| Nicalls 2007-10-07 ch 8, | abuseohh hiatus, im just hopeing you'll write about seeing her dad. p.s. good chapter |
| Gem Of The Stars 2007-10-06 ch 8, | abusethis was a good chapter, and nu!! don't leave!! |