this was a verry nice story, like you said in one of your comments a bit darker then the show but still portraying the characters very well. I loved reading it.

That's so sad, and so like Shawn, so dysfunctional, and that's just how he would take it if Gus died. Like he'll act, 10 years later, like nothing changed, but he would be more...hollow. You portrayed it so well, even if it made me really sad. I'm normally a romantic fluff kind of girl, but you made it to my favorites!

Really, freakin' fantastic this story. I especially like Lassiter's 'It's always been him' comment.

I'm finding it hard to breathe after finishing this story on Psychfic. Beautiful and melancholy and oh Shawn!

I know I already read and reviewed this over at Psychfic but I had to see if you had it up over here as well. This story is definetly different from every Psych story I've read so far but I think it's differences that make it stand out to me. You keep everyone in character and you show the deep bonds that Shawn shares with his father and Gus. And what would happen to him if those bonds were broken. It was all highly realistic and in character and I don't usually read dark fics like this. But I'm glad I found this one.

Thank you for writing it.

-honda

Wow, I honestly can't believe that I'm just now reading this story. It didn't follow the usual manners of the show, but I have to say this is one of the most interesting and best written stories I've read, no joke. I appreciate the twists and the fact that Shawn is showing emotions. Good luck to future writings and thank you for this fic, God Bless.

I've just recently started watching Psych, and the fanfic I've been reading is stupendous! While I love your SGA stories, this is spectacular! I like the believability of it, and how in-character everyone seems. Thank you for a great story.

amazing! Do more!

great job!

Wow, from the first chapter to the chapter names you did a nice job with this fic. I figured it was Shawn all along but you still weaved the storyline in a way that made me want to keep reading until the last line. His reactions were completely believable for a guy in his situation and you could feel his pain even though he wouldn't let anyone see it. You did a really great job! Thanks so much for sharing!

I LOVED this. It was a little dark, but you really kept me on the edge of my couch. Not I need to go read some fluff to get rid of the melancholy.

That was a really beautiful story. It made me sad, but I am really glad to have read it, thank you.

This was a downer, but it brought tears to my eyes. It's a well-crafted story to be sure.

wow. just, wow. i mean you totally just did that amazingly well

interesting