That was brilliantly dark and intrigingly sweet in a twisted, demented sort of way. I absolutely love what you have done to Wilson's character. Most people write him off and good and very light. You took his character and developed it inn suh a way that I think you actually inproved on what happened in the show. I think Chase's actions most approprietly reflect how the T.V. show Chase acts. Overall, it was a good stort that was well written with a plot line that flowed seemlessly from one point to another.

Alex

I really like this story. It's very well done.

What song are the lyrics from?

I love the way that you make the story. You keep to the show, while still showing more of the character's personality then most people are able to get. I love how you give Wilson more life to him then some fanfics do. I also love the way you made Chase. It was perfect and its one of my favorite House fics so far.

Oh this is pretty cool, awsome job. I think you've got Chase down; and it's also cool that Wilson mirrored House. Nice

Well done. I like how you've weaved the story.
9/10.
Cheers,
Ocaso.

*giggles* Oh that's just priceless.

There really isn't enough Chase/Wilson fic. There's even less decent ones. Other then a few grammatical mistakes, this was really good. Some of the best Wilson and Chase characterization I've seen in fic to date.

I fear my review will have to be your last line on this one:

"** brilliant!"

Oh, I love it; and it's just so twisty and wonderful and hilarious!

~Erinne

Your story is F*ck*ng Brillint!! (i don't know if you can swear in reviews or not ;] ) hope to read more!!

Truly amazing. Loved every bit of it =D

Just like the last line, this whole story is freaking brilliant. (Why so few reviews? My guess is that it's too complex--and not fluffy enough--for this site.)

I love the way you show Chase scrabbling to hang onto his distance and non-involvement, and the revelation of Wilson at the end as being not-so-sympathetic actually took my breath away.

Some lines are sheer genius: “Sorry, I thought we were sharing self-indulgent sob stories,” and

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Chase regards Wilson for a very long moment.

“This is the point at which I make very bad decisions,” he says, “Just so you know.”

“I make bad decisions around now too,” Wilson replies, and they both look at each other in trepidation across the table except the concept is neither as mad nor as intimidating as it should be.

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You fit so much subtext into so few words, and I can only gape in admiration at your skill. I also love the ending, as Chase realizes the snare even as it closes on him.

I've always enjoyed your stories on LJ, and I hope that you will continue to post them here again. Excellent work, and thank you for posting!

*is in awe*

I think I love you. Not nearly enough people write Chase and Wilson together and you do it so incredibly well.