This is really, really nice. Adorable, in fact. And probably true. Great job :)

I love it! :D

lol at those stupid snivellus shippers. They always say James is a bully but they ignored the fact that they are basing it on Snapes POV. They also ignored the fact that while at 15yrs old James maybe immature but Snape is evil dark fanatic. Snape is worst imo.

Jame is a loser and bully snape will always love her he is way better then james and would have never stood there.

Good story.

sweet!

TwiTragic13

xoxo

Aw I really like this. James saved Lily: That was really sweet. And poor snape, he just lost lily to potter.

The Snape thing at the end made me sad. It was really sweet

This is really good! I like it a lot.

Aw! That was so sweet! I loved it. I added this to my favorites.

Very sweet and very real. Loved it!

Thank you for not turning this into one of those "and suddenly Lily realized she was in love with James" fics. I liked the subtlety of emotion, and the raw emotion laced within the fic. This was really well done. You captured each character fairly perfectly, in my opinion (not that that counts for much), and everything came across really effectively. I liked this _

This made my eyes water. It was so sad, and sweet.

Forever,

ArtChick

Poor Snape! I like lil/jam and sna/lil it's so confusing!

aw, i love it! x