Oh wow, I love this but...it's so sad! I don't really know what to say, just that I really enjoyed it.

That made my eyes water. It's so REAL, like it could really happen, but at the same time so incredibly the oposite of anything you'd imagen with that group. The life is gone, but they have yet to die. It hits the hardest in its realistic-ness.

"strange avoidance of proper nouns" *laughs* I can relate.

Fantastic story.

Although it's highly sad and, yeah, melancholic, the reality of it really got to me. It's good to see a stark vision of Ouran once in a while. And, besides, their matured selfs always intrigued me.

It's beautiful, it's poetic, it's harsh reality, it's matured, it's sad. You write beautifully. (And that quote from Peter Pan is amazing!)

An order to eat chocolate? xD Suits me. xD

(The oneshot was beautiful.)

Dudly -xx-

This is very, very depressing. I do need chocolate. I give you a round of applause, you're a phenomenal author. I think this is a very well done story, but I really can't say I enjoyed it...I really want Tamaki to be happier. But this is a very good story.

This was beautiful! Excellent characterization work; I always imagined Kyouya thinking about Haruhi in terms of "wasted merit" (at least after he starts to "befriend" her), but this is the first time that I found it in another person's work. Tamaki was wonderful, though it was sad to read what kind of turn could his life take.

Well, keep writing.

It was so sad but lovely writen.Gradz 2 u

Beautiful. D: And very, very sad.

The imagery totally stuck in my head, specifically that of Kyoya watching the ink of his signature dry, and Tamaki imagining Haruhi "evaporating through double-doors." Really, very powerful images. They really stuck in my mind.

I also loved the Peter Pan quote at the beginning. It's awfully fitting.

Very, very well done. :)

Between this and your Tamaki-is-actually-a-crazy-person-because-someone-died fic...

Well, I dunno. *shrugs* I guess I can say that I'm not as depressed as some of the other people? XD But then again, this is *me* we're talking about...

-takes a bite out of chocolate bar- Its not working. I'm still depressed ._.

I LOVED THIS! It was really wow how everyone's life was kind of miserable and the ending was simply beautifully writen!You chose a set of nice words that accompagnied the emtion of this story perfectly! Keep it up!

*sniffles* That *sniffles* was so *sniffles* sad! *bursts out crying*

Tamaki just isn't Tamaki without his boisterousness and obliviousness. To see a calm, measured Tamaki is almost too much. I don't WANT Tamaki to grow up and be like this! *sniffles*

As usual, this is a wonderfully impeccable piece. I loved the imagery of the ink shining at the end of Kyoya's statement before it dries flat and dim. And Tamaki's dream. He really has left his neverland behind. That's more like a nightmare!

Beautifully sad! I much enjoyed this!

Wow - angsty; however, I loved every word of it.

Man. Now you gave me an idea for a fanfic. This was awesome, though. So sad.