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| SallyJetson 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseOk as unlikely as it would seem that Lindsay would get as far as actually giving Mac the full job before he turned on her, the plot tied in nicely as to the reason why he went easy on Lindsay. |
| dana flame princess 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseoh god that's so embarassing! |
| wjobsessed 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was very original and quite shocking! And a bit disturbing. As the shock wore off I had a good laugh. Thanks :) |
| RockinLizzy 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I might be a bit too stunned to give a proper review, but damn. That was probably the oddest turn of events I've read in a while. I can't really decide if it is hilarious or horrifying (in all the best ways, of course). |
| Railynn 2007-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha very funny story. but I think it is kind of unfair for Mac to get all mad and rightous on Lindsay, He had to know who it was so he could have stopped the massage form the very begining but he didn't. He let it contuine even though he knew if was wrong. He just as at fault as Lindsay. |