oh elaine i love it!! its so beautiful, i love the part in capter three where it says let go of pain and stuff, awesome job i have to go noe but ill read the rest later! bye see you later!

I love it! It makes me smile. You are a gifted writer. Your way with words is so graceful and honest. That's what I love most about your poems. Keep writing! You can only improve!! :D

Oh! Is this how it ends? It's so sad that she gave up even though it would've been impossible to think things could be changed. Still...It was a lovely poem. The lines I liked best were "Let go, of pain/ Let go, of thee". It felt like she was finally coming to some sort of agreement with herself. The very last lines were good too. :) You always end your poems so well. Their ends always give a sense of finalization and it's satisfying to read. Wonderful job! :D

Another poem!! How wonderful. :D I really liked the end where it says "Once upon a weary dream". That was so nice. This poem has nice imagery. And in the beginning I liked the lines, "Silence holds back the words/ Tearing deeply at my soul". I liked this sequel. Great job and write more soon!

Ah...I am speechless. All I can think of to say is that this poem was beautiful. You capture emotion so well! My favorite line was "A hollow pain deep within my soul". This poem has such a lost voice to it (in a sad but good kind of way). There's this sort of longing and sorrowfulness that pulls on you. Very heartfelt. I really enjoyed reading it. :) Write more soon!