o dear.
o dear o dear o dear.

DON'T QUIT WRITING ON THIS.
PLEASE.

please continue this depressing but addictive story! i liked the small scene with Orchard. I bet it's Libby on the phone right? if i am right, Sheen has like... 3 people that have a crush on him! please continue!

Deseo; cool nickname.

Very good stuff here. Nice job with Sheen's thoughts.

Keep the good writing.

LIBBY?!?!?!?!?! IS IT?! IS IT?!?!?!?! And this slash is REALLY creepy. I mean really... Anywhos, I know how Sheen would feel. It's kinda sad yet inviting at the same time. Anywhos, I LOVE your story and you need to UPDATE ASAP!

iloveslinky

P. S.-please!

Ok, that was freaky... but cool, in a scary kinda way. I liked it.

Damn, you write some powerful stuff! I've noticed a trend in your stories... Or at least your latest ones that I've read... You like Sheen in pain and you do a beautiful job describing it... Did any of this happen to you or are you just super imaginative? Update, please!

Pretty good scene with Carl, and excellent job with Bella; friendly yet scary.

Keep the good writing.

Thats was really powerful. I loved the way you describe when he jumps. It's so... real. It's so perfect. You really need to write more of this! By the way, loved the poem!

great fic please wright more sheen & cindy

Very good start. Landing on a car must be painful but it's surely softer than the floor.

Keep the good writing.

POOR SHEEN! HE IS LOVED! I LOVE HIM... Kinda... ok maybe not in that way but I love him! **Falls down crying and rocking back and forth muttering "Sheen don't die" repeatingly** Oh and YAY first reviewer! POST MORE!