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bourket
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
I love the idea that you have with this story. the only problem i have with it is that Ranma might be a little more leery with anything involving wishes. Apart from that i like it and hope to read more.
Rogue7
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
Cool start, Interesting concept, though I'm sure Ranma would like Ranma-chan to be taller than the 'base' model ;) Did the 'new' Ranma-chan model carry over any of the changes Ranma made to his model ?
tatewaki2000
2008-01-11 . chapter 1
wow.
cool idea. hope you csn update soon.
^_^
Duke Bonez
2007-11-29 . chapter 1
Neat idea and pretty well written. My main suggestion is that you stay away from using phrases like "more seductive" and describe the changes. The show that Ranma's cursed form is more seductive don't just say it.

Other than that I just want to see another chapter =].
Vilkath
2007-10-30 . chapter 1
Well this could be very intersting. I have read a few xovers involving games from Everquest to world of warcraft, but the way you went about it should be rather intersting. Especialy if you maintain this game world view instead of it just being a real alternate universe type world most xovers do.

All though I must say, if his job remains locked permently it could cause problems later as he can't have a sub job.. if my memory is correct. It has been ages since I played this game. Not to mention changing jobs is a huge part of FFXI.
lighthalk
2007-09-28 . chapter 1
Got a good start here. sounds like you going to have fun with this one.
Rose1948
2007-09-27 . chapter 1
Looks like Ranma is in for some interesting times. *chuckles*
Ho-Iatneh
2007-09-25 . chapter 1
A very consistent chapter, like all of your other works, though i haven't played FFXI, it is intriguing nonetheless.
Bobboky
2007-09-25 . chapter 1
sweet
ranko lina Inverse
2007-09-25 . chapter 1
It's .hack but guest staring Final Fantasy 11 and Ranma?
killroy777
2007-09-25 . chapter 1
good idea updates
Dumbledork
2007-09-25 . chapter 1
I like it so far. Can't wait for more.
FalseExact
2007-09-24 . chapter 1
Think this is a great idea I've played FFXI thought it was pretty good, of course with the .hack setup while not the first time done is so rarely seen doesnt matter. for a pairing think a mithra might be good choice help out with the neko-ken. anyway, good luck with your story
Michael The-Zorch Haney
2007-09-24 . chapter 1
So good so far. I've play FFXI myself for a few years, the PC version, on the Asura server. I'm a level 27 Puppetmaster with a level 14 Warrior sub job named "Katsuhito". My home nation is Bastok, I recently achieved Rank 4 and I belong to the LeagacyBeastmasters Linkshell. I have a level 12 Red Mage, a level 31 White Mage, a level 15 Beastmaster, and a level 18 Black Mage. I have Ranger unlocked but I haven't leveled that job yet and I am close to unlocking Paladin and Blue Mage.
DerektheRogue
2007-09-24 . chapter 1
BWA HAHAHAHAHAHA!
OH! Now THIS should be GOOD!

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS?!

Think pleading Ryo-Oki here folks...


Derek The Rogue
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