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| SaphirArya 2008-08-21 ch 1, | abuseI love it! I've read this almost 20 times now! |
| LittleGloriaFaith 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseHey there! Lauren here. i hope you're doing well. I LOVED the Awakening! It was one of my favorite episdoes for Season 3, along with the Painted Lady, The Day of Black Sun, the Western Air Temple and The Boiling Rock. I did relate a lot to Katara in the Awakening. I'll explain more in a PM. I really did like your story. I honestly agreed with what Katara did or how she treated her Dad in the episode. I had a feeling somethin' was goin' on between them since the beginning of the show. And I was right. I didn't think the Awakening was a disappointment at all. I really liked it. I actually cried during the scene with Katara/Hakoda. I'll explain more in a PM. I hope to read more from you soon. Lauren |
| singwiththewind 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story. I loved how you kept the characters, well... in character. :) Also liked your version of what would have happened between season 2 and season 3. I completely agree about finding it odd that Aang would be left alone in his condition. At least 'the headband' was awesome. Now if they'd only release a new episode. :) |
| inlovewithkatara 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseYeh i thought that Katara would have been with him when he woke up to. Your a real good writer |
| Aangs fangirl1214 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good! I am with you on hating how Aang woke up alone. I think it would have been awesome for Katara to wake up with him. Anyway, I think the conversation with her father was very sweet and caring, I wish my Dad would listen to me that way. Hakoda seems so great and kind. Toph is so funny, the comment about Sokka made me laugh! I think my favorite part was how Katara left out the "I love you" for him. Great! |
| Ms. Maria and Ms. Kiera 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome! Faves! ~Maria~ |
| Wishing Only Wounds The Hea... 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abuseSo much better than Katara's "angst". Ah, I needed more Kataang! |
| charleegirl 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseAw...so Katara-ey! |
| redskin122004 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseCool, i better check out the other story? This is qite good, did you freak when you saw Ozai's face like me and my newgirlfriend did?...i think you know her. Skittlesandcombos? if not, forget it, but if so, email me back. |
| intricate designs 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseGreat! It's very sweet. I agree with you. The Awakening wasn't that bad, but it had a few iffy points. Wonderful job! |
| pinguinolatino 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseAw, I loved this. And I like the way you made Katara handle her feelings with her dad. In the episode it was a bit random. Hee, I loved the Ozai made out of noodles thing too. He's multi-talented. I'm starting to love Aang even more this season. I mean he dances, he's artistic, and he's a bit of a flirt? |
| Loupami 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseYes, I was a little surprised that noone was there with Aang when he woke up too. I guess they figured he'd find them eventually. This was a great little oneshot, I especially liked the bit of tension between Hakoda and Katara that still resulted in a conversation about deep feelings. |
| SnakeEyes16 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great take on events before the Awakening! Or how they should have been anyway. I agree that any problems Katara may have had with her father should have been taken care of before, and not used up valuable time in the episode. "Maybe she would even sleep in her own bed tonight. Then again, maybe not. One step at a time." I found that line to be quite funny! It was a smooth ending to the story, and made me smile. =) Always watching, ~SnakeEyes |
| Kumori Doragon 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseAww... This one is wonderfully cute. I just loved it. And I agree with you. It didn't seem right to have him awakn on his own. KD |
| Unkept 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseI love this! Keep up the great work. |