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| Rapid Puzzleshipper Saiko 2007-09-29 ch 3,  | abuseAwesome story! Really cool! Intresting that Yami hasn't remembered yet...plz update soon! |
| Protector Of The Nameless 2007-09-29 ch 3, | abuseI worship this story! Die Rainbow serpent! Die! Please update soon! |
| Sonata Varius 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. |
| yugixyamiyaoilover 2007-09-27 ch 3, | abuseUpdate soon |
| Zypher Evans 2007-09-27 ch 3, | abuseyour discriptions were better in this chapter giving an actual sense of space. In time though you'll be writing 50 words + as if it was nothing XP I can sense a bit of the story plot, the whole authors intuition thing goin on but eh. Still, I'm searching for more in the story, a certain flare. |
| ornvinge 2007-09-27 ch 3, | abuseI just love Munkir and Nakir, they are so funny! ^^ Great chappie by the way, Ill be here, waiting for more! |
| Shamise 2007-09-27 ch 3, | abuseWoot!! Thanx for the update!1 |
| KNT 2007-09-25 ch 2, | abuseInteresting so far *nods* I like the plot line and your hint of humor in this =D. Keep up the excellent work. Hope to see from you again soon. |
| Panguins-in-American-Oh-my 2007-09-25 ch 2, | abuseI love this story please continue |
| Zypher Evans 2007-09-25 ch 2, | abuseIt was alright with the exception of a few errors in spelling. Then again, I don't catch all of mine either. -shrugs.- I wish there was more meat to the story it seems slight barren, the descriptions are decent enough to provide a picture but things were missing from it. It also felt to me that Yugi was just teleproting all over the place. I mean sure he was running, but for how long, was he tired by the end of it, was he sweating, etc etc. I hope you don't take any of this constructive critisim the wrong way. I just found that this chapter was harder to enjoy than the first. |
| Shamise 2007-09-25 ch 2, | abuseCol story! I hope u update soon!! |
| angel61991 2007-09-25 ch 2, | abuseinteresting please update soon. |
| Zypher Evans 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseA wonderful start, cant wait to read more, I'm looking forward to it. |
| EternalEnds 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseLooks like a good start to an interesting story. I'll be keeping an eye on this one. |
| angel61991 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseinteresting please update soon. |