|Reviews for Beautiful|
| andy 12/26/12 . chapter 1
| tuxjim 9/26/12 . chapter 1
Otachii is more than a little full of him/herself (gender doesn't matter; the heart wants who it wants regardless) with that ending author's note. But, justifyably so.
This is the third or fourth time that I've read this story and I am STILL struck by the genuine-ness of it. These are real world people, experiencing real world emotions and situations. And I agree with the other reviewer - LOVE the little boy at the end who is trying to give his mother a wake-up call about her attitude. Another of the reviewers said something about mis-used grammar...so what? Most people don't talk the way they write, either. II didn't notice it, so it DIDN'T detract from the story. 'Nuff said, as Stan Lee might have said.
Both the story and the author are now included on my 'favorite'-s list;I'll probably read it again in future to lift my spirits (I also read "More than Ribbons and Lace" Sailor Moon Ami/Makoto pairing for the same 'boost').
Ja ne for now.
| LoZOoTFan101 7/23/12 . chapter 1
Again, like many others (long) before me, I have to say this was amazing...despite a few grammar errors...
What makes it great, though, is how REAL it is. THIS is what it's like when you first fall for another girl...
Love the boy at the end, serves the mom right.
| Ink Tsubasa 1/22/12 . chapter 1
TT It was truly beautiful as the name states... I'm glad you wrote such a sweet, enticing story for Lucia and Sumire. You did perfectly in capturing their personalities and character. I could imagine the whole thing and that's really important in stories, especially romance. It revealed Lucia's sweet side and how she loved Sumire too. I'm positive this is the best story I've read for these two! Good job and keep writing.
| Niomi-Sensei 6/30/09 . chapter 1
That was a stunningly beautiful story, even though it's just one chapter. I also like how you included Lola and Laila as a part of building Sumire's thoughts/feelings.
| futbalfreak18 3/15/09 . chapter 1
This is so amazing. I've read it so many times. Please keep writing Lucia/Sumire. They're one of my favorite couples and you write them together so well. I love your poetry also. You are a great writer.
| Mistique Four 2/28/09 . chapter 1
I like how you incorporated the view of society in this story op on girlxgirl-love. I like the overall look inside of the feelings, thoughts and emotions of the two.
P.S. I also like your poem.
| Demon Cat08 2/17/09 . chapter 1
this is a very beautiful story
i really love
| PandorasTube 12/13/08 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh, I completely loved this! Thanks for sticking it up, it was wonderful XD
| Ascoeur 11/14/08 . chapter 1
aw!u just gotta love his one haha it was truly AWESOME! the ending was cute with the little kid and all that crap about love and stuff ur story was awesome!u should ry keep on writing! haha, idk how to rate cuz I'mnew here...(sorry about the username, I ran out of ideas...)
| lostuntothisworld 8/16/08 . chapter 1
oh! so sweet and funny!
u are one of my fav stories now!yay
keep up the good work
| Kiros Razer 8/6/08 . chapter 1
| Rukuri 7/17/08 . chapter 1
Ah...it's so nice to read a tasteful story in such a small fanbase. Thank you so much and I sincerely hope you write more 'Venus Versus Virus' stories
| simmie 6/14/08 . chapter 1
I loved it, it was great. I also loved the peom too. You should write more Venus Versus Virus because your good at it.
| AnImaginaryKilling 4/5/08 . chapter 1
absolutely love it)!goodjob