this is pretty good you should continue
its funny too XD

lol. I like this story...odd behavior for xenomorphs, but they are very funny anyway, especially Spine.

Tommy would survive, doesn't he? It would be sad for him to died. And will Spine become er...mate with Sara? Is Sara turning into a Xeno Queen or what? O.o Or simply just laying xeno eggs? o.O

And um...her family seem to be a VERY acceepting type as well as non-xenophobic to the extreme...literally...

You've got to Update! Please Update??

Lol, that was a nice story. I loved it, its going in one of my personal faves ...though what ever happened to timmy, I didn't understand that part.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH BWAHAHAHAHAH! Nice story! lol so many things i can relate to w/ the relatives. And, not to mention some new things i can use for my Xeno Analysis fiction... course labelled not as mine. Keep up the good work please!

I'm not sure what your Eragon's r like but if people want you to go back, i would have to assume you have an entrancing touch to your writing. Have yet to finish this...

*laughs* Sara's dad is funny. You know, I have a question that keeps buging me. Will eventually Spine morph into a Praetorian or something? If he does it will be awesome.


Please update soon because I'm DIEING to see what happens next.

Hm, Sara and the alien are talking thru telepathy, that's a new one, I wonder if she'l talk with others, anyway,great chapter, I like it so far, keep up the good work. *smiles*

Who, the alien is actually IN the city, how come no other people saw him, even if he was on the roof.


Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next.

I wish I could've seen the look in Sara's face whe she saw the alien, otherwise great chapter.

Great start, keep up the good work.

So, again I should have reviewed each and every chapter but instead I posted a somewhat lame-o review...I need to make amends... so another mis-mashed amalgam will have to suffice...

First and foremost a great job with am intricate plot -you have mixed the genres of sci-fi, horror, drama, comedy and romance all nicely and presented it to us in one commendable and interesting little package. A daunting task well accomplished. I particularly like the flow of the story in that you weave in and out of (or combine) each genre seamlessly. I never came across any bumps or burps.

You have raised questions and implications with each genre: AVP Universe as well as the general AVP v. Mankind - both sci-fi and horror; the fate of all the characters - drama; the budding relationship between Spine and Sara - comedy and romance. I am particularly interested in their relationship and hope that your warning of "separating the Men from the Boys" means what I think it means...and in reading other AVP fics their possible physical relationship would really be neither out of the ordinary nor harm the story in any way. I believe that they deserve each other in more ways then one... Spine is almost like the 'Bad Boy biker boyfriend' and Sara the 'girl from the other side of the tracks; , and they are both trying like hell to fight what cannot be fought - hormones (or rather pheromones - even harder!).

As to the characters themselves another well done. I can't say enough about Spine - so I'll just go on rather then bore you or take up your time. The Jefferson's are a wonderful family in a Griswaldian way. Mr. and Mrs. Jefferson find nothing really irregular about Spine, and in fact almost immediately accept him as one of the family. The interaction between Mr. Jefferson and Spine during their assessment of Sara's car is so abnormal it becomes normal(my type of life!).

Thanks for your hard work, and as you seem pretty busy I won't nudge you to update - just a simple begging and pleading this once...Catch you on the flip side.

'Catz

P.S. Pass this one on - Don't know what a Buffalocatz is? Well - whatever it is, it does sound kinda tasty doesn't it...drooling yet?

P.P.S. "Hi mom!" (the smart ass that is me just couldn't resist...)

this i am gonna keep up with :D

i like the humor that is in it

spine: can i go scare your parents
sara: have fun
loud noises and screeming later on
spine: success!!

that particular sceen had me laughing for a while

What an awesome fic - a friend passed this on to me trying to get me to read something more then my usual anime, and am I glad! I LOVE Spine. He is such a great wise-ass and the ultimate roomie! I hope that you update soon and when you do I'll be there ;D

hehe awsome and very funny hope this gets updated soon its extreamly amusing.