cool fic is there gonna be more to it?
BA forever

It's nice to see where the enigmatic Jo Icati came from. :p

This is a strong first chapter. You have set the tone, there have been no glaring grammar faux pas; but most importatly, you have piqued my interest as to how the next chapter will develop (which is the job of a first installment.)

The talent is there. Why haven't you finished this?

Hey that was good, please ignore the haters. Keep this up.

hahaha, nice one! Looking forward to the upcomming chapters. I like it. 8/10

it was ok a 5/10 thats not bad for a chapter it might go up with more chapters

All The Best

The Good Doctor

Well, this is short…

Ugh, Mary-Sues! Why, Why must people have Mary-Sues?

At least your Mary-Sue doesn’t kill the English Grammar, with some work this could be a good fanfic. On a scale of 1 to 10, 1 “delete” and 10 “Novel Worthy”, I give this a 7.

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Awesome!! Great. 9.5/10

Freakin scary! Awesome.

Wow, do you realy think this piece of crap story is any good? Bitch, please. I'm just waiting for you to go all out on a mary sue character creation so you can recieve more flames...

Oh, and yes this is a flame.

Have a nice day

Lalalala. First reviewer for this first interesting chapter. Yay Jo didn't break any bones!! Haha, well, looking forward to the next part. Sorry if this review seems short of detail, but hey, this is only the first chapter after all, just a marvelous introductory and a grand fall! Whahaha. Go Jo!!