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Ray-nee-chan
2009-11-26 . chapter 48
i loove the story, though da ending was.. alittle unsatisfacting (sp?)i hope well see some of ur other new work!! thank u for finishing the fic lol!
Wolfy Pup
2009-11-16 . chapter 48
AWE! *Sobs* Such a sad ending! Awesome story though!
Kirst
2009-05-27 . chapter 30
Ok so I suck at reviewing and I won't be able to give you any kind of helpful advice, but can I just say that you are freaking hilarious. I was dying of laughter infront of my computer reading this chapter! Keep up the awesome work!
Sayuri Kurosaki Uchiha Hatake
2009-05-05 . chapter 48
sniff. aw the ending was cute.

Are you going to write an epilouge? you should...
It would be cute.

ex. Gin and Kakashi were married shortly after and had x amount of kids...
invisible-gurl
2009-04-29 . chapter 48
aw so sweet... are you going to write an epilogue? or just fix up this last chapter?... great job ^^i loved this fic =)
Rokhi
2009-04-29 . chapter 48
Well, what do you know...there was light at the end of the tunnel afterward. After 48 chapters, all I can say is that your patience greatly exceeds mine.

I'm glad you didn't just kill everyone and say they all lived happily ever after. The bitterness mixed in with the sweet made it much better than that, although, if I didn't know how much you love happy endings, I would have half-expected Gin to never return. You know, make this whole thing a giant tragedy. n.n

Yep, I could definitely see the spots that suffered under the rush of "can we finish it already!" It would be cool if you came back someday and buffed those spots up a bit. If you did, you'd probably have a few chapters worth of a finale.

Anywho, glad to see you managed to finish. There are few things in life that bug me like permanently unfinished stories, so I'm happy that didn't happen here.

Good luck with whatever you write next, and I'll keep an eye out for the next installment of Fear and Blood.

~Rokhi
(previously/better known as akai-sora n.n And thanks for the shout out in the author's note! You're very welcome!)
SuperTay
2009-04-29 . chapter 48
So it's over...

It was kind of sad thought. Kai becoming blind and his family still won't forgive him after trying to save his sister. Then you have Sakura losing an arm ( She's not really my favorite but still...)

Sasuke being dead...Me like. If you've been hearing what was happening in the manga, you'd be suprised to hear how many want him to die now.

Overall I liked this story. If you ever plan to write another fic (Don't do it because I said so) you should do a side story about what Gin was doing during those years or just write an entirely new fic with nothing to do with Kurayami whatsoever.

Good luck with your other fictionpress fics.
EvilBoyzR2Cute
2009-04-25 . chapter 47
Hi there,

I have managed to resist commenting until the very end, and I have to say that I love your story!!
I can clearly seen the interactions between the characters, not to mention the face that Kisame probably have from Hato's non-stop talking. Ryu is just too cute~ (I love his personality).

Anyways,
Please update soon!~ I'm not sure my sanity will last until the next chapter.
Keep continuing~
Sayuri Kurosaki Uchiha Hatake
2009-04-09 . chapter 2
Can you please update soon? i really like this story.
Also it seems that you get mixed up with the There, their and They're

There- as in look over there! or there it is!

Their- something belong to the person or thing, ex their house, their knife.

They're- a shorten form of They are
Sayuri Kurosaki Uchiha Hatake
2009-03-15 . chapter 46
Are you ever going to post more chapters?
Please! I want to find out what happens next1!
invisible-gurl
2008-12-21 . chapter 47
lol... and now to see if ryu/gin will go after pein XD... great job and plz update soon ^^
Snowy
2008-12-21 . chapter 36
I have been trying to not reveiw until I reached the most recent chapter but I couldn't resist this one-
At the mention of the fact she put chakra into the animal drawings I got a rather entertaining picture image/s of some shinibo gaining animal like features (In particular Shikimaru. Gaining cat ears and tail XD)
I shall now return to religiously reading *^*
Siry Pop
2008-12-18 . chapter 47
yey!! I'm so glad i found this story, it's very good, and the plot is just great. congratulations on that!

now please, you have to update! I really, really want to read more.

well take care and once again congratulations for this wonderfull story, and please update as soon as you can :3

See ya!
Sayuri Kurosaki Uchiha Hatake
2008-12-17 . chapter 45
Lol the hato girl talking on and on. man i can see the look on kisame's face lol!
Sayuri Kurosaki Uchiha Hatake
2008-12-17 . chapter 30
I would soo chose Kakashi, he is hot! and powerful, rumor has it that sometime later on in the manga tsunade dies fighting pain, and kakashi becomes the new hokage.
You know who would make a great hokage?
Shikamaru. He's smart.
But he would say no way its way too "Trouble some"
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