*Laughs* I found the style of this fan fic to be very interesting and enjoyable. The plot was interesting, and eventhough I barely know anything about Kingdom hearts (all I do know comes from fans of the game) I found it easy to follow and enjoy. I even read it twice before I reviewed. Well done.

Hah, I guess Zexion isn't the uber-genius I thought he was after all XD

I absolutely love this story. It's hysterically funny and made me almost fall out of my chair laughing multiple times. I recommended it to my roommate, and now "take it, **!" is our universal cue for bursting into giggles.
I love all of your characterizations, they're so brilliant and humorous. Larxene's sarcasm and Zexion's cluelessness are my two favorites. I also think you handled not-a-virgin! Demyx extremely well and made his satyrism (sp?) a source of humor and angst rather than awkwardness. I don't even hate Marluxia for corrupting poor Demyx!

Also loved: "still not naked..."

Okay, there was this one part I remember laughing at... Wait, that was the whole FEAKING story! God, I nearly ** myself so many times it grew annoying. I so wish there were more stories out there like yours. It drives me insane, you evil genius, you. I love it, like ALL your other stories. And this is going to haunt my dreams as I wake up laughing so hard my gut hurts and I have to run to the bathroom.

Absolute favortie parts? Where Zexion first talks to Larxene, Zexion tries to subtly manipulate Demyx (so not wroking), when Zexion told Sora Riku likes him and, of course, the end. Amazing and I'm laughing again with tears in my eyes. You are my God, my idol!

This is my fourth time reading this...it manages to make me laugh actually out loud ever. Single. Time.
You're stories are the only fanfictions I can read over and over and not get tired of them...
This is my FAVOURITE kingdom hearts fic of all time
'to breathe or not to breathe.'
Loved that! XD
I also just loved the part about obsessions...I had to read that over and over because I loved it so much
...if your fanfictions were in a book I'd be turning down pages!... and possibly vandalising by means of underlining! 8D
My favourite thing that you did with this story was bring Larxene into it
'we don’t have a button for Demyx on the register'
The scenes with her in were so hilarious and well done! and I have to say my favourite part of the whole thing
‘he definitely has drawn a conclusion.”
“Oh, really?” Zexion asked, almost curious but mostly irritated. “And just what might that be?”
Larxene smirked happily. “Demyx thinks you’re a complete and total psycho!”

Keep up the AWESOME AND UTTERLY AWE INSPIRING WORK!

Wow, that was amazing! Zemyx is love. Good job!

You know, every time I get into a new fandom, its usually because of a really great Fan Fiction that I click on out of curiosity and/or boredom.

This story is the random fanfic I clicked on thats gotten me hooked on Zemyx.

Fantastic story and great portrayal of the characters.

Well done.

oh geez, no words. 'cept ROFL!!1

(and uh maybe hot hot cute hot i love you?)

This was awesome! I had a great time reading it ^_^ You have Zexion's analytical side down to a T lol
~the dreamer

wow. zexion is REALLY REALLY lucky that demyx liked him first xD

^_^ hurr hurr! That made me gigglesnort and smile! I just love how socially awkward Zexy is sometimes. XD

So, I've been reading too many yaoi fics of late. Even though I've read this before (though I'm pretty sure I didn't review it, so I'm doing so now) Zexion assumed it was his neighbor and his girlfriend screwing--I had no such notion. I was mildly surprised when he mentioned girlfriend, and then I remembered that that was the normal assumption, lol. Zexion makes me giggle. He's so cynical.

“'Maybe, when you stop giving your statements inflections that belong solely to questions, I’ll consider a conversation,' Zexion responded dryly." That was an awesome sentence, lol. Maybe it's because I do that all the time. Turn statements into questions, I mean. Either way, it made me smile.

Haha, he starts to like him, doesn't realize it, and completely pushes Dem away. Poor Demyx. (I totally just had deja vu. That was kind of a random place for that, lol.) I don't know if I could handle twenty-five days of that. Although, I understand where Zexion is coming from, too. Just not so...rudely.

And Riku and his, "He called you names. It did wonders for the atmosphere," made me totally happy. Zexion's so rigid.

Yay! I love that part! When he realizes that it's Demyx and Marluxia, haha. And then is turned on. Great stuff.

"Hell, I'd even screw you!" "I accept." Well, almost. But yeah. HILARIOUS. I love how this is just as funny as the last time I read it, lol. Greatness in a bottle.

Yeah, so I couldn't help read the rest of the way through. So. Amazing. "Take it, **." That was perfect. And of course Demyx's whole plot was wonderful. I love how Demyx was not the idiot in this one. He's portrayed that way a lot, but...This almost fits him better. The role of the manipulator, that is. Anyway, great story. Of course.

Right. So. I had this awesome review. Seriously. It was all planned out in my head. Everything sat there in my brain, perfectly punctuated with paragraphs and underlines and bold print and italics, and everything was color coded into this rainbow-like display.

And then I finished the fanfic and I was completely and utterly lost for words.

This has got to be the best Zemyx - if not the BEST - fanfic I have ever read. I'm not just saying that, I'm not being overly-enthusiastic, I genuinely mean it. You have turned Zemyx into my OTP with this one fanfic.

Everything was laid out perfectly. The descriptions, the dialogue, not to mention Zexion's mannerisms, which had me cracking up the whole time I was reading. I was already a massive fan of Zemyx, Soriku, and Marlarx, so this fic was kind of like striking gold for me.

The mentioning of other characters (Vexen, Lexaeus, etc...) who never actually appeared in the fic was also a nice touch, because you managed to fit in a lot of characters without deriving from the plot, something I'm still having trouble with, personally.

Demyx's humor was greatly written, and his interactions with other characters were exactly how he should be portrayed - fun and child-like, but not stupid.

I think I'm gonna stop my absurdly long review now. Anyway. This fic was excellent, and you should really be proud of yourself.

I don't remember if I reviewed this before or not... so I'll do it now just in case. Don't have much to say except I love this story, it's smart, creative, witty and sweet all in one. You've done a great job creating real, fleshed out characters - not charactures - and wrote just a well written, enjoyable story. Good job on you :)

i hope yo0u get on the colbert report!
hehe! i'd totally watch that!