Beautiful.

Beautiful!

The only resin I don't like this story is that it made me want to cry, I don't like story's that make me want to cry! Very sweet story nun the less :'}

That was honestly one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. Simply amazing work!

Love,

Lynn

I don't know if you saw, but J.K. Rowling admitted today that she almost killed Ron in the end. So, to ease my broken heart today I've been reading Hermione/Fred fics. I've been a R/H shipper since CoS, so it was hard for me to think of an alternate ship. But, this story is amazing. The Twins have been those characters that were so lovely in their relationship with the Trio that Fred's death was truly heartbreaking. Fred was characterized amazingly well here - he was finally a complete character, no just one of the Twins but Fred. And knowing that he dies all the more touching. I would hope that Fred died with no regrets. Seriously, exceptional.

I don't know if you're a Fred-doesn't-die writer, but because this is before the battle it's up to the readers imagination to decide what happens, and unfortunately the ending came quite clear to me that he does die, and that the just-in-case-kiss was his last, and that made me really sad. I could feel their mood, in a way, and I felt my eyes fill with tears at the end there, even though I rarely cry...

I'm brazilian and I hardly enjoy reading english fanfics, but your's got me completely! So lovelly, and bitersweet in deed! I like the way you write ) But I can't help wonder if Fred would ever have those fears in this very way X

Well, keep on writing! )

that made me cry :( one of best, really. :((((

This is one of the best fics I have ever read and the first fic to ever bring me to tears. Beautifully written and such a brilliant story. Probably my favorite story so far.

break my heart and tear it into pieces why don't you ):

beautiful writing, thank you

Well that might as well be the most romantic and beautiful story I have ever read. Thank you for writing that. This could now be my favorite story on this site. I'm crying. It is truly beautiful.

When I read the "I hope I die laughing" line, I was like 'Whoa, she must be psychic to have predicted what happens in DH!' But then I realised that this fic was published after DH. Which is totally crazy, I can't believe DH was released waaay back in '07. Totally crazy.

Anyways, it was a great fic!

That's it I'm depressed! It was really good! And fit in with the story as well! I think I read it ages ago but didn't leave a review! Lazybelle

Oh, this brought tears to my eyes! Wonderfully well written, I loved seeing this more serious side of Fred. Very bittersweet, but sweet none the less. Thanks for writing. :)

To atruwriter

That last line? Haunting.

Well done.

CW