Good i guess

i think u should do sum merimaid childhood lik luchia hanon

Ahh, so awesome! I loved it! It had alot of meaning to it and it was so sweet!^^ I espically adored the last line, that made me squeal like a fangirl nyaha XD I love you're writing style, everything seems so well thought out and it leaves a lasting impression. I think GaitoxSara is so cute now naww, they should be together. I hope you can write more soon, I just need to read more! Excellent work and cya soon~

I loved it, it was seriously awesome. Its great that you choose to write about Kaito's parents because there are no stories about them and there is so much potential for them too! I think it was so well thought out and I could picture the entire scene in my head. I loved the ending though, it was sweet naww they're a happy family XD Amazing job on this, you are a talented writer! I can't wait for your Gaito one, that will be even better(grabs popcorn) To the next chapter!

so cute!^^ I can't wait for a new chapter!^ please update soon!^^

SQUEE!! I'm so glad somebody made a Gaira drabble! I want to write a fic about them, but don't have the time or info yet. T_T Anyway, you've made my day. It was nicely written. You painted a vivid picture with few words. Great!

I've actually been hoping somebody would do this. There are already enough stories about the mermaids. Anyway, I enjoyed this and could picture it happening. Kaito's parents were so cute. Nice job!

That was very good Suzu-chan! As always your story was very well written and I definatly enjoyed reading it. I'm so looking forward to reading the chapter with Gaito. Cya then!

Not really sure if Kaito's adopted parents have names, but I'm pretty sure their last name doesn't have a "u" in it. (The manga always spelled it Dômoto, even when Kaito went missing in the competition)

Great so far, can't wait for Gaito's chapter. (who looked really cute when he was little)

Amazing as always, Suzu-chan. ;) Can't wait for Gaito...

With Love,
~Jewelieishness