 LynLin 2008-12-07 . chapter 6#4 Bed head - LOL That's an interesting image.
#5 Breakup - No Hiei no it's not goodbye. That made me sad.
#7 Cold - LOL Not chicken? What is it then? XD
#8 Currency - Seriously! All Kurama's treasures are pretty worthless here since they'd attract all sorts of attention.
#12 Dutiful - LOL So true. Hiei is all independent but works for Mukuro without complaint, really. haha
#21 Jade - LOL I love references to your past fics. So cute. Hiei is a fast learner after all.
#22 Judicious - Oh my. HAHAHAHA. Kurama goes running to Yusuke when Hiei is stupid. Nice.
#23 Key - Hah, he WOULD say it's all because of Mukuro. But yes. Cute.
#25 Melody - LOL LIKE WHAT, AMV'S? XD
#27 Opium - LOL Paranoia as the anti-drug. I love it.
#29 Partake - Wow, everything makes me laugh. This was so funny, especially your use of capital letters. XD
#33 - Huh, Kurama really DOESN'T sleep, does he? HMM!
#36 School - Hiei DID get beat by schoolboys. Wow. Weird.
#37 Scream - LOL AHFKJHA:LFJA I love this. I just like it when Yusuke and Kuwabara are weirded out by Kurama and Hiei.
#38 Seduce - Hiei's version of seduction, eh? Nice.
#44 Strawberries - WHAT WHERE? XD LOL!!
#48 Warmth - Snuggly Hiei is always a cute image.
That was a wonderful set of 50 sentences. And 6 times! Wow. You're really good. I'm in awe. Every sentence you wrote could easily be turned into a oneshot/story. They're all so beautiful, and I loved every one of them. These are just the ones that gave me a stronger reaction than the rest. But wow. Great job. Thanks so much.
-Lyn |
 LynLin 2008-12-07 . chapter 5#1 Ring - AW Hiei doesn't have a guaranteed victory unless Kurama's there. Sweet.
#4 Box - HAHAHA COllEGE apps. Awesome as always.
#6 Hurricane - OH SO SWET. I love it. So much.
#10 Drink - Ahahaha Kurama acting ridiculous. Nice image.
#14 Music - AW I like to think that Hiei listens to music in secret now because of this. Aww.
#24 Strength - HMM! The idea of Kurama being stronger than Hiei is interesting. Making him doubt himself.
#26 Ice - AWW. Hiei's way of retreating from something is far better than Kurama's. It's less hurtful. Aww.
#30 Body - This made me go aw.
#31 Sacred - GRR I hate Hiei's mama too. Sorta. haha
#32 Farewells - That is so true. Just...wow.
#34 Formal - I like it when Kurama's age becomes apparent to Hiei. Yep.
#39 Overwhelmed - Ah, yes, that's our Hiei. The complete opposite of normal. Poor guy.
#41 Wait - LOL Ah Kurama's such a sneaky little perv.
#44 Hope - We can never get enough of the three artifacts. Les sigh, Hiei.
#47 Highway - LOL Hiei...in so much DENIAL, really. XD
#49 Lock - LOL MUKURO! Ah, it would be an embarrassment to security. LOLOLOL. |
 LynLin 2008-12-07 . chapter 4#1 Comfort - LOL Masochist Hiei. Nice.
#3 Soft - I really liked this one because once I think about it, I expected them to be soft too. But they wouldn't be. Wow.
#8 Happiness - OH That just made me so sad for Hiei.
#9 Telephone - OMG. That's genius. Kurama. Oh man. That's so sweet. Though I see little use for a phone when they hardly talk when they ARE together anyway. XD
#15 Touch - AH He's already so desirable. HM...
#17 Tears - This was sad. I don't like the idea of Hiei crying. Very sad.
#19 Wind - Oh that just makes so much sense. It's cute.
#23 Hands - I completely agree. LOL That smile...gah so scary.
#30 Star - LOL Hiei DOES get topless a lot...LOL
#32 Confusion - I just absolutely love outside perspectives on Hiei and Kurama. Especially confusion. KEKEKE.
#34 Lightning/thunder - OMG So true.Hiei would be an awesome weathervane. lol
#37 Technology - Oh, that's so adorable. Hiei and video games. Aw.
#42 Clouds - Ah, so peaceful. I loved it and its tranquility.
#45 Hell - The ending with them both being good at staying alive was powerful to me. Very nice.
#47 Moon - Amazing description. Just so pretty. Wow.
#48 Waves - Ah, the little things Hiei does for Kurama. Makes me go aww. A lot.
#50 Supernova - Hiei WOULD make it longer. LOL Man. Love that. |
 LynLin 2008-12-06 . chapter 3#1 Motion - HAHA HIEI! XD That was just adorable.
#2 Cool - I like when Hiei is in denial and makes excuses. haha
#3 Young - Yes, I also seem to forget their ages when Yusuke is involved. But aw. That was sad.
#4 Last - AH. That was NICE! Struck a chord in me, dunno why.
#9 King - CONSORT? Definitely. Competition? Hm nah. First one's better. HAHHAA
#10 Learn - Wow, that was really powerful.
#13 Change - AW. Hiei being adorably cute again. I would laugh too. AW.
#16 Believe - Ah, Yusuke, the catalyst again. I love it.
#17 Vision - It was so serious and then ended in such unexpected humor that I loved it.
#21 Fool - AW. I love that moment. Always.
#23 Child - haha I totally understand Hiei here. So creepy to have a kid look like that. Gah.
#25 Shadow - LOL CLUBBING?!?!??!? XD Hiei is cute for following.
#29 Safe - Nice interpretation of Safe. FAJKJFALFAJ That was very sweet. And...kinky. lol Safe picking equals sex. HMM!
#32 Eye - LOL HIS TAIL! Expressive.
#40 History - Ah that was nice. Their pasts are like, aklsdjf. Loved how that was written.
#45 Naked - Conditional nakedness? XD HAHHAA.
#46 Drive - Ah, the things Hiei goes through for Kurama. I like that.
#49 Hunger - AH I LOVED THIS ONE. Omg. Just. Wow. |
 LynLin 2008-12-06 . chapter 2#1 Walking - So serene and beautiful. I liked this one.
#6 Whimsy - HAHAHAH YOMI!! And HIEI WITH GREEN HAIR. This was hilarious.
#7 Waste - LOL I see Kurama putting that smear on PURPOSE. Being the little manipulative punk he is. hahhaha
#10 Weddings - HAHAHHAA. POOR HIEI! But he cannot deny the cuteness that makes up Kuwabara and Yukina. Les sigh. Such an innocent relationship.
#11 Birthday - THIS WAS SO INCREDIBLY SWEET. I want to cry. lol Hiei singing Happy Birthday. Oh man.
#13 Bias - Ah, Evil!Kurama. KEKEKEKE. Hiei is awesome.
#17 Belief - I liked how Kurama is the random factor. XD hahaha
#18 Balloon - I like how whipped Hiei is. YUSUKE adds more fun. hahha
#19 Balcony - ...That made me sad. Really sad.
#24 Quarrel - I like the idea that their fights are nonverbal. I don't see them arguing out loud at all.
#27 Jester - SADISTIC KURAMA. WOOT. HAHAHHAA.
#30 Just - HMM! That is definitely interesting and makes total sense. I love that.
#31 Smirk - Hiei IS an expert on that, huh? XD
#33 Stupidity - HAHHAHAH. Man, those two. XD HAHAHHA
#34 Serenade - LOL That made me laugh too. That'd certainly get rid of any tension. hahaha though probably not on purpose.
#39 Share - AW. Injured Hiei definitely gets cake. Aww.
#42 Neutral - AH NO NONOONO Me sad. Makes me sad.
#45 Natural - Ah, it's a marriage. It is it is. |
 LynLin 2008-12-06 . chapter 1OKAY. I liked SO MANY. Here you go:
#1 Air - I just liked the idea of Kurama watching Hiei's clothes merely to see him half dressed XD
#3 Beginning - the part where it says new beginning rather than reconstruction. It just hit me that it fits really well.
#6 Dark - I like the companionship.
#8 Door - I like the explanation for why he doesn't use the door. It was really sweet.
#9 Drink - I dunno. That was just cute and funny. Kurama rubs off on Hiei.
#11 - HAHAHAHA. Hiei should read a book rather than taking over the world. Nice.
#15 Flexible - I just love your Mukuro. It's incredibly cute how she knows everything but allows Hiei to continue BSing. HAHA
#17 Food - YES! Exactly how I see Kurama giving Hiei food and shelter. Nice nice.
#19 Grave - Very sweet, and that is one of the main reasons why I see Hiei as never being able to hate Shiori.
#23 Honour - Kurama has no honour. Teehee. I liked that. He IS quite full of pride.
#27 Metal - Acid eats metal. SO AWESOME XD.
#32 Pretty - LOL It works. NICE.
#37 Snakes - AWW. That made me go AWW. haha I never thought of it that way, but it totally works.
#39 Solid - I felt like laughing with Kurama, trying to imagine Hiei's face. haha
#44 Taboo - Ah, Hiei and his need for friends. I love that, though he easily denies it.
#48 Welcome - Teehee. I liked everyone being in this one and Kurama at the end.
#49 Winter - I totally see that happening. VERY CUTE.
#50 Wood - Kinky. I'm always up for that. XD I LOVED THAT.
So there. Just the ones I LOVED, and the rest I liked. None were bad. Thank you for writing them.
-Lyn |
 juniper 2008-04-02 . chapter 6 Yay! More sentences! I particularly loved the reference to the jade dancer, it made me happy beyond all reason. Thank you for another lovely chapter! |
 vetgirl1293 2008-01-27 . chapter 6Really great. There are so many that I died laughing at and others that were like: Aww! When I read 21, I was like wait a minute... and then i read the bottom and was like: That's it! Man I wish I could write Hiei/Kurama like you. You always do it amazing. Ah! If I had such power! Such a following, what havoc I could wreak!
Fabulous!
Emily |
 Anna Jaganshi 2008-01-23 . chapter 6I noticed that I like the more humorous ones the most. Go figure. *bangs head on wall* But, of course (and as usual ^^), I liked far too many to put into one review. You wrote great--nah, better than great, but that's the limited vocabulary kicking in--sentences for her prompts. I'd send some... but there's no creativity up here. But I'm done, fantastic job once again! ^^' |
 UpperClassK9 2008-01-22 . chapter 6Jade (21) and Judicious (22) and Key (23), they were so cute! But no one would get that joke about the dancer if they hadn’t been reading TLoF. Key seems familiar, too… Partake (29) is good too! I like Routine (32) too… Other favourites include… Scarlet (35), Scream (37) [oh-so-canon! XD], Seduce (38), Singsong (39) [Wahahahahaha!], Solstice (42) [Dang, I really need to find out the date for that], Strawberries (44) [I’m gonna make a guess where, and I don’t think Hiei likes that XD] and Terror (46) [that was a really nice "description"].
Finally a detailed review, huh? I guess i just wanted to delay going off the com. :) You usually ask to state facourites for this kinda things. And an update, yay! I missed your stories, was re-reading one the other day. |
 ladyasile 2008-01-21 . chapter 6this is yet another brilliant set! i have to admit that my absolute favorite one is #39. other that were so unbelivably wonderful were : 28, 38, 42, 44, 46, 48, 37, 35, 25, 17, and 8. good senetences!!
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 Azamiko 2008-01-21 . chapter 6Hahhah, I love these... |
 Le'letha 2008-01-21 . chapter 6Hi. Thanks for reading and reviewing my 'Idle Hands'--I so admire your work that getting a compliment from you means a lot! Meeting the YYH cast was Not My Idea, so my perception of them has always been a little harsh...but they are a bit of a wreaking crew!
I'm glad you're continuing these. I like:
Feral, because that's a great characterization
Hunter, ditto.
Inertia, which I recognize from Language of Flowers
Partake: 'It was an unofficial decision that Hiei was the prime target for teasing in their little party (and it was an official decision that Kurama was Not To Be Made Fun Of if they knew what was Good For Them)' ...just because! Ah, the boys...we love 'em!
Safety, it's so cute...
School--yes, he's awfully stupid at times!
Singsong, because, because, because...
and Terror, which made me laugh. |
 PsychoLeopard 2008-01-21 . chapter 6I thought I recognized that jade dancer from one of your fics. (Could have been one of Blossomwitch's too, so I wasn't completely sure.)
I loved #23.
Great stuff. |
 loveloveclock 2007-12-25 . chapter 5They're all really beautiful.
Ne, where did you get these prompts? I was thinking about doing something like this for my OCs. ^^ |
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