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juniper 2008-04-02 ch 6, anon.	abuseYay! More sentences! I particularly loved the reference to the jade dancer, it made me happy beyond all reason. Thank you for another lovely chapter!
vetgirl1293 2008-01-27 ch 6,	abuseReally great. There are so many that I died laughing at and others that were like: Aww! When I read 21, I was like wait a minute... and then i read the bottom and was like: That's it! Man I wish I could write Hiei/Kurama like you. You always do it amazing. Ah! If I had such power! Such a following, what havoc I could wreak! Fabulous! Emily
Anna Jaganshi 2008-01-23 ch 6,	abuseI noticed that I like the more humorous ones the most. Go figure. bangs head on wall But, of course (and as usual ^^), I liked far too many to put into one review. You wrote great--nah, better than great, but that's the limited vocabulary kicking in--sentences for her prompts. I'd send some... but there's no creativity up here. But I'm done, fantastic job once again! ^^'
UpperClassK9 2008-01-22 ch 6,	abuseJade (21) and Judicious (22) and Key (23), they were so cute! But no one would get that joke about the dancer if they hadn’t been reading TLoF. Key seems familiar, too… Partake (29) is good too! I like Routine (32) too… Other favourites include… Scarlet (35), Scream (37) [oh-so-canon! XD], Seduce (38), Singsong (39) [Wahahahahaha!], Solstice (42) [Dang, I really need to find out the date for that], Strawberries (44) [I’m gonna make a guess where, and I don’t think Hiei likes that XD] and Terror (46) [that was a really nice "description"]. Finally a detailed review, huh? I guess i just wanted to delay going off the com. :) You usually ask to state facourites for this kinda things. And an update, yay! I missed your stories, was re-reading one the other day.
ladyasile 2008-01-21 ch 6,	abusethis is yet another brilliant set! i have to admit that my absolute favorite one is #39. other that were so unbelivably wonderful were : 28, 38, 42, 44, 46, 48, 37, 35, 25, 17, and 8. good senetences!! :-)
Azamiko 2008-01-21 ch 6,	abuseHahhah, I love these...
Le'letha 2008-01-21 ch 6,	abuseHi. Thanks for reading and reviewing my 'Idle Hands'--I so admire your work that getting a compliment from you means a lot! Meeting the YYH cast was Not My Idea, so my perception of them has always been a little harsh...but they are a bit of a wreaking crew! I'm glad you're continuing these. I like: Feral, because that's a great characterization Hunter, ditto. Inertia, which I recognize from Language of Flowers Partake: 'It was an unofficial decision that Hiei was the prime target for teasing in their little party (and it was an official decision that Kurama was Not To Be Made Fun Of if they knew what was Good For Them)' ...just because! Ah, the boys...we love 'em! Safety, it's so cute... School--yes, he's awfully stupid at times! Singsong, because, because, because... and Terror, which made me laugh.
PsychoLeopard 2008-01-21 ch 6,	abuseI thought I recognized that jade dancer from one of your fics. (Could have been one of Blossomwitch's too, so I wasn't completely sure.) I loved #23. Great stuff.
SilenceNights 2007-12-25 ch 5,	abuseThey're all really beautiful. Ne, where did you get these prompts? I was thinking about doing something like this for my OCs. ^^
Anna Jaganshi 2007-11-29 ch 5,	abuseI can finally review! :D Take THAT FF . Net! That went by quick, but oh well. All great things must come to an end. They were all fantastic TO the very end, though! Hmm... well, come now, you know I liked all of them. xD But I think I liked the last five the most. They were... intense, I suppose. But yesh, awesome! ;)
vetgirl1293 2007-11-16 ch 5,	abuseAmazing, as always! My favorites were: #50 #46 #44 #40 #35 #32 #31 Especially #31 because you focused on her suicide in a way than I don't think has been done. Wonderful.
Clow Angel 2007-11-15 ch 5,	abuseFavorite: #49 Lock Haha.. ^^ Wonderful set as usual!
Le'letha 2007-11-15 ch 5,	abuseMy original review up and DIED on me, so here's another one. I really hope you get another set of prompts, because these are very enjoyable, like little snapshots. Like one of their ending sequences, the one with the spinning photos. There's a couple of those I'd just love to get my hands on, and I can say the same thing about these! OK, responses I loved and why: Hero: have I mentioned recently how on the dot you are with characterizations? Well, you are! You capture them perfectly. Box: Yeah! Panic, college apps people, panic! So there! Music: I did wonder what he did in all the spare time he must have...and yes, I bet Kurama knows. Silk: we did not see enough of an angry fox in the series! Ditto for 'Talent' Fire: now THAT is going on my one-liners list! (repeats quote several times aloud, and laughs) Body: because I love the phrase 'while they waited for the ring to be replaced'. I didn't quite catch what you meant by the ring the first time, but then I read it again, and laughed. Laugh: I got the idea that, most of the time, he's laughing at everything behind that poker face. Highway: I bet you can turn that into a oneshot! I'd like to see it! Lock: (laughs hysterically) 'Give the man a key already!' (laughs some more) A friend of mine and I have voted you one of, if not THE, best YYH writer out there! Would love to see more from you soon!
UpperClassK9 2007-11-15 ch 5,	abuseThe first one and the last two are my favs, definitely. You started off this chapter very well. Ended nicely too.
ladyasile 2007-11-15 ch 5,	abusefavorites... 3-9, 17-22, 25, 28, 30-37, 40, 43, 45, 49 (lol funny), and 50! the last one was really sweet!! awesome job! :-)

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