   katTheCharmer86 7/8/04 . chapter 4Great story! |
| Hottie-Babe 3/3/03 . chapter 4 I Love i thought you need to deatailed *Love Relationships* better. like tenchi and Ryoko's but it was still kewl. But i totally love how you detailed the friendship between Ayeka and Ryoko it was really awesome. Thats what i like in this story even though Tenchi chose Ryoko, Ayeka accepted it and was still friends with Ryoko I just love that.
Ryoko Fan Forever |
| Kai-Chan 1/26/02 . chapter 4 ok...one Japanese word...two American words, three syllables...
KAKKO II!
THAT WAS GREAT!
Onegai write some more! On-e-gai? _ |
| DemonGoddes 11/28/01 . chapter 4 This story was great... |
| UNI 11/12/01 . chapter 3 Great Story!
Tenchi and Ryoko rule! |
| UNI 11/12/01 . chapter 4 Great story...but add more romance (T/R) and emotion and of course more detail.
But anyhow it was a GREAT STORY!
*keep on writing!* |
| Freebird1 9/29/01 . chapter 4 such a really nice cheery story except for ryoko's virus but I knew she could pull through oh yeah ryoko's da bomb ok i'll shut up now but this story was really nice i really liked it |
| I Luv Ur Fic 9/23/01 . chapter 4 oh such a good job...this fic was absolutely wonderful _ |
| Moyoshu 9/8/01 . chapter 4 Very good...Ryoko waking up and being fully cometent of everything was a little too rushed, it would've been sweeter if Tenchi took Ryoko out there when she was all weak and she needed support. But either way it was still good. |
| Santa Claus 8/31/01 . chapter 1 HO HO HO! MERRY CHRISTMAS! |
| Saiyan Moon Goddess 8/29/01 . chapter 4 I'M ADDING THIS TO MY FAVORITES! IT WAS BEAUTIFUL! |
| SSJ4 BROLI 8/29/01 . chapter 4 The first sentense was confusing, and I think you should use some other descriptions besides space pirate/Ryoko or she over and over. (I do that myself, but using the same thing over and over sounds repetative.) By the way, Mihoshi never crashed teh Yagami into the lake, she crashed her ship yukinojo (actually taht's the computer on her ship, but anyway) into the lake, mostly kiyone and her beam down from their ship. Still, a good story, but as I said I would work on the detail (the thing I had problems with in the beginning.) try to describe the settings, and emotions more. By the way, thanks for the mention at the end. I hope to read more of your fanfics soon. |
| DaGoku64002K1 8/28/01 . chapter 4 Great story. Great chapter. Great ending. Great writing. |
| DaGoku64002K1 8/26/01 . chapter 3 On to the next chapter. |
| Dennisud 8/26/01 . chapter 3 I have a 7 part fic with he same name, but a different story, is this the rewrite? |
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