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Delrusant
2010-01-03 . chapter 7
Until the truth comitee, everything went rather well for Harry's plan. He should have stop there his vigilante because prevention for such thing as chaotic as a whole british wizarding world cannot be done.

The abscence of Voldie earlier could have some unexpected result but to force fate to find some other hardship onto our hero might have too much for this story.

And the non communication inside the ministry can be resolved by articles and letters if Harry continued to think instead of being lost because of no plans before hand. Especially with such a minister and in such a climate.
marauders5
2009-12-05 . chapter 7
Hey this was supposed to be complete what happened.
lipasnape
2009-10-08 . chapter 7
Excellent story. Novel settings. Open for any continuation. I really hope you will catch your Muse walking around here again.
purrfus
2009-09-14 . chapter 7
sometimes you just can't win.

Any other story couldn't have this last chapter's end and be considered complete. The way you wrote this one - no matter what he does, it will always be something.

Nice. In the nastiest way.
ILikeComps
2009-08-24 . chapter 7
Good story for the most part. I did not like the ending leaving me with many questions. Thanks for sharing!
dead feather
2009-08-15 . chapter 5
Is there a sequel to this?
TJeanetteT
2009-08-10 . chapter 7
Don't you hate when nothing goes your way? It seems that is what Harry always has to deal with.
CrystalRose27
2009-08-04 . chapter 7
A really interesting story so far. Please continue it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Jimbocous
2009-07-26 . chapter 7
Interesting story so far, with a lot of potential. Sorry it's abandoned.
Cassandra30
2009-07-15 . chapter 7
Ack! This would be a nice story to finish sometime.
Cassandra30
2009-07-15 . chapter 6
You don't think James, Sirius and Remus won't look for Peter. Leave them a message telling them Peter was a Death Eater and would betray them.
Cassandra30
2009-07-15 . chapter 5
Excellent! I like it!
Cassandra30
2009-07-15 . chapter 4
Well you can always let that recording get out as well. Albus condemning himself. I hope Arthur is alright. Harry should have told his grandparents who he was or at least that he came back from the future. He should take this opportunity to meet his other grandparents as well. Maybe he can change Severus' life and Petunia's as well.
Cassandra30
2009-07-15 . chapter 3
Sweet! Well done!
Cassandra30
2009-07-15 . chapter 2
Way to go, Harry!! Try to save Regulus as well. Sirius always hated leaving him behind.
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