nice

It is a little sad but I love it.

I really liked this. It's quite sweet at the end.

This was so full of angst, but in the way I like it... >< So sad..! Argh, Tyki, you pedobear.

I'm lovin' this.

D'aw. I love how even Kanda cares so much for Allen in this story. :3 Very sweet.

Ah, this was amazing, even for a drabble fic! ; 3; Wonderful job!

Aw, that was so sweet. Lavi and Allen are so cute...

Rhode and Tyki = best villains ever.

Er...the amount of swearing from Kanda and Lavi makes them rather OOC since even in the face of this I think they have more sophisticated or intelligent insults. Other then that, I hope you continue this fic!

this is such a great fic! *¬* i love it

The amount of cussing was a bit OOC for Kanda and Lavi, but all in all I liked this.
Nothing like some Angst and a bit of romance to spice up a story.

Great job, the emotion (and story in general) was wonderful.
+Fav.

Oh, and the Lavi/Allen-ish romance... Awesome ;)

what did they do 2 allen? ILL KILL THEM!

T_T ALENN!! Oh god poor baby! T_T

PLEASE DON'T LET ALLEN DIE! CONTINUE BY ALL MEANS! ALLEN NEEDS LAVI aND HIS RELATIONSHIP TO CONTINUE TO BLOSSUM AND GROW SO HE CAN BE HAPPY AGAIN! PLEASE, OH GOD, PLEASE CONTINUE.

X3 haha, the story's really so good so far~ but no really. Continue. Please. Now?

that was a great fanfiction...you should consider a sequel or something... it was so well done

I had read this fanfic awhile ago and I remember loving it... so I looked it up and read it again~! and this time i actually reviewed~! I LOVE THIS~!