Yay! Good ending to a good story!

Great Chapter. Is there gonna be a sequel. I hope there will be.

Wow! Great chapter. Loved how you handled the bad guy's demise. Eric had more Jack Bauer in him than he thought...

Two of my favorite shows. So far so good...just one little beta note: In order to get their boss out, their willing to stage a prison break." Should be "...they're willing to stage a prison break."
tiny picky thing...but overall an interesting read.

Great chapter I always thought it would be cool if Jack met Horatio, and his team. Update very soon please

luv it, amazing

Great start

CSI Miami and 24; two of my favorite shows in one fic... This is a very good start,I hope you continue this!