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| chicacha-dude 2008-04-18 ch 1,  | abusehahaha funny ! i could really see an image of aerrow at the end screaming ! GREAT JOB ! |
| Tatertwig45 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseLOL! I love it! That was so funny!! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL! |
| PKBitchGirl1 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abusethis is real cute and funny, I knew it was going to be Dark Ace, but imagine if it was someone like Domiw**ker the egotistical explorer, Repton or even The Colonel. Oh, or Mr Moss, LOL |
| CrystalWildfyr 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseLOL! One of the best yet! |
| noodels 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseHa ha funneh! But if I could give you some criticism you should add more description to the characters reaction to shape them a little more! Such as: “Mom! You are gonna marry the Dark Ace?!?!" Aerrow sputtered, shooting to his feet. "How is he blackmailing you?!" " am not going to have him for a step dad! I would rather eat stink eggs!” He screeched, pointing an accusing finger at Dark Ace. |
| Lmao 2007-11-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseTo funny...can't breath...this is going on my favs no question! |
| Star Wars nut 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseHahahahahahahaha! That was giggletastic! I can so see that happening with the actual characters too. |
| Lace Agate 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseFunny!! Luv it!! Man, there should a sequel! |
| Dotskip317 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuse*snerk* yes I did think it was funny, especially the yelling part; yelling always makes me laugh, I don't know why... ss \__/) |
| SakariWolfe 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abusexD Luv it! |
| falloutboyfan6126 2007-09-25 ch 1, anon. | abusehahaha yep i thought that that woz funny hahaha! |