nice job. Happy new year!

I cannot believe that this story was the first HP fan fic! You are on page 1 of 11,312 pages! Oh, and the story was great too :)

OH MY GOD! OH MY FRICKIN GOD!! YOU STARTED THE HARRY POTTER archive! YOU ARE A LEGEND I CANNOT BELIEVE THIS! NOT ONLY WERE YOU THE FIRST TO WRITE A HP FAN FIC, but YOU ALSO STARTED THE MOST LIKED couple that never was! DRAMIONE! (I know I'm telling you about yourself which is pretty stupid...) BUT OH MY GOD! If you ever read this then I would totally apprcieate it YOUR PART OF FAN FIC LEGEND/HISTORY! I AM TOTALLY PHSYCED you started the most biggest thing in FAN FICTION YET! BYE BYE TOTALLY AWESOME PERSON!

Wait, so, you were ten when you wrote this?

FIRST HP FANFIC! I like this alot you should update soon =)

Wow, I still can't believe this is ten years old.

i'm sorry but do u realsise the awesome magnitude of being the first person to write a harry potter fanfic, u are the beggining of a legendary group of dedicated fans! u r AWESOME!

Wow, what a great story. The ending is a bit sad, but then again, Thomas' life was pretty sad. The beginning of this chapter was a bit dull, but the ending was exciting. Thomas is bad-**; he should be on "Cops: Wizard Edition". Congrats on making the first FanFic EVAH again!

XOXO,
BumpSetSpike

This story is going great, I love Thomas Erwin. Some facts are a bit off, but seeing as this story was written in 19, I don't really care! Keep up the good work!

XOXO,
BumpSetSpike

Wow, I really like the connection with the original school and Hogwarts! We don't really hear about different magic schools until the fourth book, which I'm sure didn't come out yet when you wrote this FanFic. Great job, I love the way you wrote Minerva.
XOXO,
BumpSetSpike

Great first chapter, but I have some criticisms:

1. Dumbledore is a bit out of character. It's okay, a lot of people write him like that.
2. There are a few spelling mistakes, but it's just the stupid one's that everyone makes from time to time.

Otherwise, congrats on the first Harry Potter fandom EVAH!
XOXO,
BumpSetSpike

Not just your first fanfiction, but the Harry Potter category's first Fanfiction! Congrats if you still are on the site.

Happy tenth anniversary to the "Harry Potter" fandom!

I'm favouriting the first Harry Potter fanfiction ever! How exciting.

OH MY GOD! First Harry Potter fanfic! That is like epic! You are my hero! Just Kidding.