 Sukoshima Aika 2008-07-01 . chapter 3Wow. That really took my breath away. So romantic without being too heavy, ya know. |
 Emrold 2008-03-18 . chapter 3Oh no. Oh no no no.
This is too beautiful! -eyes swirl-
I love everything about this fic: how you managed to keep so many details about the game tied into the fic seamlessly (Akihiko's greeting when you return to the dorm, the fact that your group can get separated in Tartarus...); you made a god out of Akihiko (if he wasn't already); and also Minato's determination near the end really got to me. I could just imagine the ending in my head, and I know that I'll be replaying it in my mind over and over again for the next few days... it's so perfect in every single shounen-ai way! I couldn't think of a better closing sentence! I feel like freezing that moment and just admiring it, like the gems you so described...
You've got me interested in the meaning behind gems now. I'll probably squee everytime I get a Garnet or an Amethyst in the game, haha!
Please write more about P3's beautiful boys! Convince me that yaoi/shounen-ai genres CAN exist in this strictly-heterosexual dating game~ -begs- |
 Kehrico 2008-02-01 . chapter 3A-ARGH
I died. Over-awe sickness, you know?
THAT IS SO CUTE! And, are the gem thingies true? P: It was a really interesting idea cause whoa man. MINATO BUDDY GOT LAID BECAUSE OF A GEM
YETH
Omg the other person was right, there were only like.. two. AkihikoxMinato fics.
YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY
I LOVE YOU FOREVER!~ /Favorite'd. Think you're gonna write anymore P3? P: |
 Cassie Wang 2008-01-11 . chapter 3 ahh that was a really good ending ^_^
i've been looking for s-ai fics on persona 3 (namely akihikoxminato) but yours was the only one i could find...and it was great! will there be a sequal? another fic? please write more! it's awesome ^_^ |
 Spoodlexiii 2008-01-01 . chapter 3Aw! What a sweet ending! Your Minato's so adorable too! Love this fic! |
 MiniMnMs 2007-12-23 . chapter 3This is the first Persona 3 fanfic I've read so far and I'm glad I was not disappointed. It's very simple and straight-forward that I kinda wish it was a bit more sophisticated, but it definitely did not bore me to death. Ahh, why aren't there more Persona 3 s-ai fanfics. D: |
 Parfait Bunny 2007-12-19 . chapter 3I'm pretty sure this is the only AkiMin fic on D8
WRY IS THERE NO MORE?
It was a cute fic though, plus the ending was somewhat open-ended. The best kind. :] |
 Samurai5725 2007-12-12 . chapter 3Oh. my. god. THAT WAS SO GOOD! The ending was perfect! And I just love how you have the whole thing kind of circling around the meanings of those stones and E! I loved it. Thank you so much for writing this! You have totally made my day. |
 S.E.C.R.E.T. 2007-11-10 . chapter 1 I really loved this pairing! I can't wait for your updates or sequel! >. |
 DyingHerInnocence 2007-10-26 . chapter 3what a really nice fanfic xD it's was so simple but... i like it xD and I love someone add AkihikoxMinato fanfic xD I really like it...
well, it a quick end > |
 TheDonutMistress 2007-10-09 . chapter 3This is the sort of ending I'm a big fan of, too! I like it when a fic has been built up so well that the readers can take the ending and see for themselves what happened next.
I definitely liked it. |
 InnocentSinIncarnate 2007-10-09 . chapter 3No! You can't end it like that...but, well, you're coming out with a sequel, right? But I liked the ending anyways. Arisato FINALLY gave the rose quartz to Akihiko. The developing relationship between Arisato and Akihiko was at a perfect pace. And, haha, I liked Junpei's interaction with Arisato--it showed a different side of him.
Hm, alright, not trying to sound rude or anything, but you're writing is "adequate". You could do better; I think you can, but it seems like you're holding yourself back. Just...describe _everything_. No matter if we already know what Arisato or Akihiko looks like or are thinking.
BTW, the "review" (in the first line) in my last...review was supposed to be "continue"...Sorries, I was thinking of reviews 'cause I haven't reviewed for a long time, and I was typing your review for Precious at the same time...and yeah...they got mixed up. Sorry. ;( |
 Rourque-Eijirou-P3 2007-10-08 . chapter 3 Wow! What a way to end it! I absolutely loved the way the ending was left hanging just like that! Am hoping you will start another Akihito x Minato story soon! I will keep my eye out. Gambatte kudasai! xx eiji |
 JustAnAmateur 2007-10-08 . chapter 3I'm not sure if I truly like it but...it's kinda nice,simple and clean cut,nothing too flashy or hard to understand,it's very safe for an ending eventhough I wish for more...I guess you did deliver it in a way...good chapter.
Overall,as an X-Play host(in my dreams),I'll give you a 3.5 out of 5.
Congrats for an ending...any sequel plan?(Just asking) |
 Rourque-Eijirou-P3 2007-10-07 . chapter 2 Ooh..! *^_^* this is a wonderfully simple story! I'm normally very picky with my fanfiction but 'Precious' seems my kinda cup of tea! I love your style of writing! And i will vair much love to read the next chappie soon! Gambatte kudasai xx eiji |