This review is for all 4 parts of the Never Alone series, and is posted in review for each.

I think that the undertaking here is impressive. The story stays true to characters, and to the HP universe, while crafting a completely unique story and adding many good, but maybe unneeded, noncanon characters over the four 'books'.

The story starts well, and gets better, but somewhere in Book 2 or 3, it seemed to lose its way, find it again, and get confused on multiple occasions. The final battle of Hogwarts definitely felt like that it was haphazard at best, and I had a horrible time keeping track of the action.

The relationships between characters, likewise, starts off well, and very interestingly in some cases, but begin to lose steam as a plethora of new creations are thrown into the mix.

Overall, I liked this quadrilogy, but it can be a very rocky roller coaster to read through the entire thing, with some highly entertaining ups, and disappointing downs.

Harry seemed a bit out of character, going out of his way to annoy a slytherin, almost like a bully, waiting until she's alone. Hope it (and he) improves.

Tom A.

I'm sorry but I couldnt get my freak on in snapes office :o

I read that as spankin to do I don't know why xD

haha that would had been a perfect one shot she should be like "trolololol"

I can tell you worked VERY hard.

nice

love the story so far

Great story, but you have a lot of sentence mistake's like when you put down him or he , you meant her or she, and shifting of names like harry when you meant according to the sentence you meant Draco, you should fix that makes it more easyer to read.

Amazing story. I'll check out the sequel!

what about Sirius?

This was a very good story.

Well done, I'll add it to my favs.

:)

This is really good so far. I wish there were more Harry/Pansy stories than there are.

Good chapter, can't wait to see where you take this story.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny