 JigokuHana 2008-09-28 . chapter 2wah! i just started reading this, only to find it hasn't been updated in a year! TOT
It's going good so far, please update when you can. |
 Amarielah 2008-08-28 . chapter 2Wow. This is great. It really reads like an episode of TTGL, because you have the tone just right and the characters completely IC. I would love to see where this goes. |
 XXXMystery 2008-08-18 . chapter 2This is getting interresting. Kamina is just angry that Simon left without him. |
 It's a mystery! 2008-07-21 . chapter 2 Oh wow, please, please continue this. I've been browsing the GL fanfics here and honestly, about 97% of them are absolute crap. And this is wonderful...I'm awful at leaving reviews, but you have a lovely voice and an amazing plot beginning for this and I just want to see how it ends... |
 Serazi 2008-05-11 . chapter 2I demand more. Get your arse in gear! :P |
 CSakuraS 2008-05-02 . chapter 2I really hope you continue this someday. I admit I'm not a fan of Kamina/Simon as a pairing, but you write everyone very IC and I could totally see this situation happening if Kamina had lived. The idea is worth exploring.
Poor Rossiu though. And wow, Nia was stuck in there for FOUR years? Is she even going to survive? D:
Looking forward to your next update! |
 Ms Malestrom 2008-01-29 . chapter 2O_O myuh. you write too damn good. lookin forward to next chapter. |
 YukaYuka 2008-01-27 . chapter 2This is really well done! Everyone is very in character and I like how you're developing Kamina and Simon's relationship steadily. Unfortunately you haven't updated this since September so I guess I can't expect any new updates now, although I would love to read more. TT__TT I'm putting this on story alert! |
 Shiny 2007-10-28 . chapter 2 I don't know why, but this make my cry twice already.
When it's about Rossiu and Simon, that's when...
The atmosphere were great, the stress, the pressure. I hate those, I feel uneasy.
But after all, it can only mean you are very good at thist. It is a really good fan fiction. |
 Glue Project 2007-10-06 . chapter 2XD Kamina is jealous...~ Absolutely love this, btw. Can't wait for more. |
 Hailgun 2007-09-30 . chapter 2Lovely story, can't wait for the next chapter ^^ |
 Sillvog 2007-09-30 . chapter 2I'm not sure just why Simon has such a big interest in the girl, but I like the reaction of Kamina to it. It is killing me trying to figure out what Rossiu wants with Simon. Looking forward to the next chapter. ^-^ |
 MissyK 2007-09-26 . chapter 1 Oh yes, an AU fic! This one was a lot of exciting promise! Kamina would have a hard time being a political leader. He's definitely more the inspirational war-type hero, but the details of running a large government is out of his league.
Your style is very smooth. The plot is most interesting, getting off to a great start.
I'm curious to see how you will play out the characters now that everything has obviously changed since Kamina survived.
Please post a second chapter soon! |
 Sillvog 2007-09-26 . chapter 1The girl in the box has got to be Nia. I hope you don't make Rossiu evil in this. I do like the fact that Kamina is still alive though. I'm having a hard time trying to figure out the timeline here. |