Awesome job. James' was sadder, but to me, when I read James' POV on his death, I always think its sadder than Lily's. I think because one of James' friends betrayed him, James was the first to die... I dunno. Maybe its just me. UPDATE SOON!

this was cool, interesting takes on the minds of those who were lost in the books...
update soon!
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Please continue! Do James next!

I've found that we're usually our own worst critic so don't beat yourself up about it. That's a good start.