i liked this story a lot! throughout the entire time i read the books i was constantly thinking, "these two (meaning jacob and edward) need to stop this fighting!" it has nothing to do with them two and there should not even be a fight it was, and is, bella's desicion in the end, and i love how you portrayed that in this story. even though they may not like eachother they don't have to kill eachother,"bella is their middle ground"!
anyway excellent job, keep up the super great work! aMaZiNg!

limeygreeness
(or Emilie)

All I have to say is...

WOW...!! That was excellent!! WONDERFUL!! Truly amazing!! :D