That was a very interesting story.

Did I ever mention how much I love your fics? That was beautiful, and the symbolism was very dramatic :D Instant fav!

E, what a cute little story! My sister read it and recommended it to me, and it was just as good as she said. It was so adorable!

"Little did she know that her life was the illusion, and she had just met the reality at the port." --I LOVED this line, and it made the ending just PERFECT. ^_^

Very cute~ I liked the little comments Largo made about Asch. I found Largo seemed a bit formal at times... but maybe its just me. Good job ^^

aw, so sad. ; ;

It's really interesting how you did that. It's very nicely put together. Great job!