Thank goodness John has finally got Dean's messages and has now rung his son. Dean needs his father's support as much as Sam does. And poor Sammy, so disorientated by the drugs he doesn't know what is real and what is not. Not surprised he broke down in Dean's arms and that is a good thing as Dean has now realised his little brother is dehydrated on top of everything else.

Wonder though if once John gets back they should salt and burn Rose's body as she could well turn into a vengeful spirit - that's if her body hasn't been discovered as she hasn't turned up for work!

Thank goodness Rose turned the gun on herself, at least Dean didn't have to kill her. Think he should have spent five minutes clearing the scene before taking Sammy off in the Impala as her body is sure to be discovered and he doesn't want the cops on his tail. There again it is obvious that Rose kidnapped Sam and handcuffed and drugged him.

Thank goodness John and Bobby's hunt is now over and the bearwalker grateful that he is released from his life.

Can understand why Sam didn't want to go to a clinic but just hope Dean can patch him up okay. The main problem will probably be what the medication has done to Sam as he is certainly suffering from having been made to take it.

What an ending to that chapter, both Dean and Rose's guns going off. Just hope she hasn't shot Sam, or if she has that the bullet hasn't hit anything vital. And hope too that Dean hasn't actually killed Rose, just injured her slightly. And Dean is going to feel guilty that Sam has gone through all this because of Rose's obsession with him.

Trust Fred to not listen to Bobby and go off photographing the creature, getting himself hurt in the process. And at least John isn't seriously injured.

Not sure if I believe Rose's story about her parents being killed by a drunk driver, she is crazy enough to have kiled them herself!

Hope Sam's nightmare about John and Bobby's hunt is just that and not a vision, the part about Dean certainly was a nightmare and nothing else.

Great that Kevin has finally given Dean the information he needed but damn Shelly for telling Rose that Dean sounded angry when he phoned the diner. And now she has Sam drugged, probably concussed as well and is holding him with a gun to his head. How she thinks Dean will ever look at her now is beyond me!

And trust Bobby to come across Fred, someone who is studying bearwalkers. He could be a hindrance to them in their hunt if the doesn't want it killed.

Rose is definitely deluded but pity Dean didn't make more of her stricken expression or the bruise on her face, probably as he is so worried about his little brother. He will be mad as hell when he finds out Rose is responsible for Sam's disappearance. Hope he gets to question the two people in the motel he hasn't yet seen as they might have been the people who helped Rose get Sam to her car.

And John and Bobby's hunt is going brilliantly either, and John is obviously worried about his boys if he keep checking his mobile phone for reception.

Why oh why did Sammy open the door before making sure it was Dean. Now he is kidnapped by Rose, who had a taser gun for goodness sake, and held captive in basement. The fact that she has been on medication and still now takes some is worrying, she has problems, and certainly not good giving Sammy Xanax to keep him quiet. If Dean finds out she has Sammy there is no way he will ever look at her again so her plan is really screwed from the get-go. Just hope she has inadvertently left some sort of clue for Dean to follow.

And what a mistake John and Bobby not going back to the motel that night, John's fault, as he really does need to ring his boys. They are not safe like he thinks they are. The only good news in this chapter is that Dean has got his 'baby' fixed!

Going back to an earlier chapter I'm wondering if there is something more to Rose than meets the eye - when she cut her hand she just shut her eyes, then carried on sweeping, like the cut had miraculously healed. And now she is definitely up to no good at the Winchester apartment, hope Sammy is at his most alert despite not feeling well as he could be her intended target in an effort to keep Dean in town. She certainly can't damage the Impala again.

Sam definitely had something dodgy at the diner again, perhaps the coffee tasting bitter was a hint. Great that Dean told him about their Dad and Bobby's hunt and that Sam immediately came up with something that Dean didn't know about. Just the two older hunters are well prepared as they head out in search of the creatures.

Hope Dean fits that windscreen quicker than he thought and gets back to the apartment.

Hmm, I'm thinking that Rose had something to do with the Impala's tyres being slashed and the windscreen broken, especially as she was conveniently passing at the time Dean and Sam were going out. And she seems to be getting a bit of a stalker, turning up at the garage, conveniently with food, but at the moment Dean hasn't noticed. Not too sure either that coffee and pie will be safe for Sam at the Iron Skillet, or that anything else would be safe for him either, even water!

Trust Sam and John to clash a bit, they just seem to trigger each other off with their thoughts. And not good Sam getting sick again. Am really not liking Rose and her jealous streak, she really seems to want Sam out of the way but I'm thinking that he will play a part in her keeping them in this town so she can see Dean - could be wrong but if she makes him sick enough they will not be able to leave. There again if Sam is sick Dean will not want to leave him to go out with Rose.

I know you wrote this some time ago but I'm catching up on past stories that I have missed!

Great start. I may be wrong but I'm thinking that Rose somehow has something to do with Sam feeling sick, especially as it seems to happen after he has eaten (and drunk) at the diner. Could it be something in the iced tea, or am I totally on the wrong track.

And this hunt John and Bobby are going on sounds tough, not surprised Sam is worried and wants to know more about it, especially as Dean seems to have some information about it.

i loved this story. awesome job!

wo ho! this was AWESOME! i loved it. thanks for a fantastic read. HUGS! Cant wait to read more of your stuff. This was awesome.

This was a great story. I found a link to it at spnstoryfinders over on LJ and decided it sounded interesting, so thought i'd check it out. I'm really glad I did.

I just loved those last few lines, knowing that Sam uses that same phrase in Bloody Mary (I think). :D

This is so well written! Now you have forced me to read all your fanfics! LOL! You really did an excellent job! I have to completely agree with you about those darn Winchester boys too! They are perfect aren't they?

Okay Rose is a freakin nut! That's great. Poor Sammy. ): Maybe Dean should be a tad more selective on his choice of girlfriends. Just a thought. Holy Cow this is excellent! I'm trying to to go "Okay just one more chapter and then it's lunch " but I can't! Fantastic Job! Great story! Excellent villian! Perfect! I love it!