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| Isabell89 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseThis story was oh so sad, yet at the same time managed to be so very beautiful. I cannot even begin to imagine the loss of a loved one, of a lover, but I am convinced that anyone can overcome it when they have someone to hold on to, to help make everything easier over time. Even though I am an ardent D/L shipper I like the idea of a Don/Lindsay friendship or maybe even something more if the situation were different from what it is on the show. |
| precious08 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abusecute and sad...=) |
| jayfray 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good,really poignant, but with a hint of a happy ending. Really enjoyed it. |
| biancapj 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was wonderful writing. I especially loved the last paragraph-pretty powerful. :-) |
| LocoGreggo 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseInteresting...not much for Flack and Linds, but very good job. Kinda bittersweet. Excellent. |
| catey123 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseMaria, although it's an angsty story, you did a very good job. I'm a closet Lindsay and Flack shipper(sh, don't tell the others!), and you have done a great job with this fic. |
| AshCarroll aka ShadowDiva 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseActually, I quite like this. I think the ending isn't as strong as it could be for a one-shot, but that's okay, cause it's perfect for you to continue it and make it not a one-shot. :D (And yes, that was a hint. :P) |
| stargazr41 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was lovely, so glad you didn't give into your worries about posting. Yes, it's angsty, but not overly so. And the ending fits perfectly with the emotion of the piece. Not perfect, but realistic. Well done. |
| TBD 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseGreat little one shot. You really like angst filled with hope and you wrote it perfectly:) |
| JennCorinthos 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseOMG!! This was amazing! i LOVED IT... JENNIFER |
| KittKatt001 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseNot usually a fan of Flack/Lindsay, but oh my god, how could anyone not like this story!! So wonderfully written, I loved that you were able to convey so many of her emotions without her even having to say anything. Amazing job. |
| Kat31 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, emotional and very real. |
| notesofwimsey 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseIt is a very painful moment, that letting go of one dream of 'happily ever after' and the idea that there can be a new dream. But I think if anyone could make a new place in Lindsay's heart, it would be Flack. Beautifully written and shaped, marialisa. |
| fatkat 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseActually marialisa, I thought you did a fabulous job! The emotions were very real and as long as Danny is gone, there is nothing wrong with Lindsay being happy and moving on. It would make sense for it to be with Don. Nicely done my dear, keep up the good work! |
| mustlovecat 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful. I'm a die hard D/L shipper as you know, but I love Flack and if Lindsay was going to be with anyone else, it would have to be him. The way they came together was so natural, born of a mutual need and respect and love -- and I loved little Joe. Awesome. |