I thought this was cute and you wrote it lovely. :)

good one

No way ! I loved it ^^
.. or maybe I like corny things? .__. well, whatever. THE POINT IS, I loved it ! ^^

I'm on fanfic under Branswilliam Rochester but I'm too lazy to sign in. It was a bit corny, but romantic all the same. It might've been nice to incorporate some more emotions rather than being detached...but it was great all the same.

i like this story too, but not as good as the runescape one. (that doesnt mean work on this one more to make it better, i want more runescape. PLEASE

yes, it is terribly corny. but your idea is really sweet. i never considerd a harry-luna pairing!

Aww! That was a sweet, Christmassy story. I like Harry/Luna stories. I especially like the part where she is carefully unwrapping the present. Nice job on this.

great job

aww that was sweet.

That was a great story. keep up the great work. Can't wait to see if you write more.

LOVE IT...yeah it's corny but that's what makes it so sweet